I Believe We're The Enemy - Comments

Loved your story till the end of ch 15 because that's when i relised there is no chapter 16 0.o
PLEASE finnish it!!!!!!!!! Oh and i do LOVE the story!!!!

More of a favourite description than a line with chapter 15:

'Frank was practically a walking awkward silence'

<3 this. I want to steal it and use it somewhere...but I shall be good and not steal it. Yeah, that sentence made a whole buttload of sense... :/

LOVED Chapter 15 (in case you couldn't tell already hahaha)...and I will try my hardest to get more people reading yours. You write REALLY well so it's deserved (as well as you being awesome of course!) ^_^ The fact that it was 'Thank You For The Venom' (which obv. my story is titled after) just made this sooo much more Epic! So yeah...*continues the update tap-dance onto your story...*

So....tell me about the kinda cute guy... ;-D xx

I've decided to tell you my favourite line of each chapter you post from now on. The one from the latest update is this:

'His eyes melt like chocolate chips.'

I'm in <3 ^_^ Good luck with your swim meet...and I shall be greatly awaiting your next update! I wanna meet Glory Girl already :O :D xx

SHOUT OUT!!! *giggles like an idiot...with a ma-hooo-sive grin on my face!!!*

I haven't been reading stuff for a few days 'cause I've been kinda sucked into writing too much...but I'm so sooo damn glad I stopped to read this today! ^_^ You've done so much with it and I ADORE it all! Sun Beam's death was sad...but REALLY well dealt with - and the dracs showing up like that/the way Korse was - that completely freaked me out!! (I like that 'freaked out' feeling I should add :P hehe)

Also, I looooved the description of Chapter 12 (as well as the make-out scene *wink wink*)...basically, keep writing Killjoy! ^_^ <3 xx

Gerard and Mikey kinda remind me of the way I act with one of my old school friends at the end of Chapter 11...and that put a HUUUUGE smile on my face!

This is my first killjoy story and it is EPIC!!! Ive never read a Ray-toro-saurus as lead fan fic before. Its really good and I just had to subscribe to it. Yay for number 6! But I am really surprised that of 6 subscribers only 3 have posted comments (inc. me)! UPDATE!!

P.S. Are you on fanfiction.net because someone there is called livelovelaugh and i wasnt sure if it wasa coinky dink or not!

~lauren

u cruel person! u know how much i wanna dye mine! >:(
anyway, AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!! that kinda pissed me off that ray kissed her at that moment, bcuz SUN BEAM! SHE IS DEAD ON THE FLOOR! U DONT KISS WHEN PEOPLE R DEAD ON THE FLOOR!
:( i liked sun beam...
and now she ran away. greeeeeat idea, gin gin :P
and gerard said he loved her and she said it back! SOAP OPERA!
:))))))))))))

gerard, admit it. YOU LOVE HER!!!!!! come on, why must everyone fall in love with her! yeesh!
ray and ginny are adorable. FINALLY they stopped beating around the bush.
ur story is like a crazy good soap opera, except theyre killjoys and theyre all familiar awesome people we love :)
of course the song they played for her was dissapear ;) u r a funny kid.
RAWR

Loving this story (even though I'm not really a romantic-type person) - it's awesome to read one where Ray gets to step up to the lead plate. I've read a lot of Frank and Gerard ones lately - and no Killjoy ones, so this is my first :D

Keep Runnin' (with the story...bad pun there haha) ^_^ xx

BEEP! DRAMA! BITCHFIGHT! KISS! RAWR! YAY! COREY IS HAPPY!

judging by the fact that the only feedback on this story is from me, i can take a wild guess that that outburst was directed to me. subtle, my friend.
on a happier note, sun beam is an AWESOME character. i mean, of course she's a bitch, but you portrayed her perfectly. and i like ray called her a beautiful monster. that was PERFECT!!!! ur so frickin good at this.
i thought the "scary" scene was done very well. jolly good show, mate! XD

OTHER PEOPLE READING THIS STORY, COMMENT NOW OR DIE!!!!

wat does effigy mean?

urgh. u know how i feel about this. they act like overdramatic teenage girls. but its ok

yeah people. silent readers suck. just taking a second to say YAY in a little box wont hurt u :)

cute chapter! i loved the end!!!!

interesting. i like it! i mean, a little more killjoy slang would be nice (especially for dr. d) and a little less ray love right away, but other then that its AWESOME!!! looks promising.