I Believe We're The Enemy - Comments

that chapter... made me fucking cry
of course your authors note made me smile a little cuz ur so frickin cute and talented and i love you.
but i was so sad...
i was making connections in my head. it went from jamie and me to u and me to meredith and me to meredith and ian and it didnt make any sense but at the same time it made too much sense and i have nice sprites in my head and dubstep doesnt help anything.
im gonna go put on some mcr and study.
i hate studying.
oh ray... if i didnt know what was going to happen next chapter i would not have any hope.
GEEEEEEEE WAAAAAAAAAKE UUUUUUUUUP

Chapter 32! (Backwards 23 hehe...did I tell you I'm getting a '23' tattooed on my left ring finger. Yeah,I'm obsessed with it :P )

I just want to scoop Ray up and give him lots of hugs. I'm on his side...and on Ginny's side...oh I can't choose! Ray needs someone to talk to though...someone neutral. I could do that ^_^

Favourite Line Chapter 32: 'Voices battle in my head.' - the simplest phrase, but it evokes so much for me. I like. A lot.

I'm about to write on your profile...but I shall end this with I <3 you serious amounts. Your writing = beyond epic. I need new words to use to describe it!

xxxxxxxxx

Hi, Lys. I love you, too.

I love your update, too! I feel horrible for Ginny and Ray.... =/ Do they make up soon?

I'm sure there are some good pictures of you!! =]

I love the song I have now forgotten the name of that you mentioned at the end of your authors note! I've been listening to all the b-side songs of Danger Days ^_^

Until next time, Lys! X]

I suppose I'm the stalker wannabe person who reads everything you post ^_^ is it bad that I take pride in that? Haha anyways, poor Mikey X[ I'd hate to be in his situation... But great chapter ^_^

I'm having so much fun reading this. XD
I'm only on chapter five, but it reminds me of my friends so much and makes me feel so comfortable. <3
Plus, I miss my boys and you're bringing them right back to me. <3
This is exactly how I see them acting and they jump into life on these papers.

mikey.

thats all i hav to say.

Favourite line from Chapter 31: 'his entire face seems to sag from frustrated loneliness.'' - even though it made me terrifically sad picturing Toro's face ever having to look like that...

Mikey stepping up to the plate like that - it worked so well. The fear, and the lonliness, and the confusion in the atmosphere for the future was perfectly written and executed. You my dear, are something special indeed...

I just spent AGGGES trying to prove to Tumblr that Kylie Minogue and MCR aren't so different. By ages...I mean about 3 hours of me googling pictures; giggling; watching videos; humming songs happily; and generally being very damn happy. This fact is something I should probably put in a comment on your profile (I may copy/paste there too lol) - but I figured you'd wanna know here to. It's something to read either way...

<3 you and can't wait for chapter 32 (which is backwards-23!) ^_^ xx <3

P.s. I haven't heard 'Heaven Help Us'. I'm off to listen now.

HOLY CRAP I LOVE YOU! U SUGGESTED MY ONE-SHOTS! <3

ok, i was on the verge of tears this whole chapter. i had no idea what was happening but all i was thinking was OMFG GEEEEE NOOOOO AAAAAAH SOBBBB and this whole chapter i wanted to punch ray in the face. for cereal. i want. to kill. him.

and when mikey picked up that gun, my heart dropped to the floor. no! no more suicide! dont even joke, just STOP-

shoo shoo, personal life.

this was a depressing chapter :( i love you

I don't have a favourite line from that chapter...not because it was bad, but because I'd feel guilty picking a 'favourite' from a chapter that made me cry halfway through. Yes, it made me cry - and for once in my life I'm not afraid to admit it.

I actually liked that it made me cry though - and that the situation was taken out of everyone's hands...it wasn't just them cooped up in the hotel around each other - they were out and in danger.

The gas-tank thing blew my mind as well. Those Dracs are so fucking evil, that a gas-chamber on wheels is something they wouldn't even think twice about. I would rather like to wipe all Dracs off of the face of the Earth now please...

Frank is being so damn great for Ginny...and I swear my heart stopped when I read that Gee had been shot. Literally, stopped me for air.

I'm about to reply to your inbox. Any time you need to get anything out rant-wise or whatever, the inbox is there for you, with me sitting on a deckchair surveying it for any movement or messages.

xx <3

That's so sad X[ Its always sad when people fight... I kind of expected Inferno to be torn apart or whatever, but she was not mentioned after her and Whatsername ran... But oh well =]

Hon, I'm so sorry about your great grandma =[

I really really liked this chapter. I totally did not expect Frank to get punched at the end of it...but that was such a good thing to put in. I can see why she did it as well - I think Whatsername is the character I identify with most; although I seriously don't know what I'd do if I ever lost my voice :|

I love the fact you're writing Green Day stuff in as well...it just all seems to be fitting together so beautifully - anyone who doesn't like it can fudge off and moan to someone who gives a fuck. Your writing is epic, and brilliant, and you're so damn talented that I need to go to the thesaurus site to find a new word for you...hold on a tic...

*Googles 'thesaurus.com' even though it'd be easier to type 'thesaurus.com' into the main bar; clicks on the site in the search results; types in 'talented'; hits 'enter' and waits for the results....*

You are an exceptionally accomplished, skilled and ingenious writer and I hang on your every word. Seriously...your. every. fucking. word.

I wouldn't say the ^^above^^ thing if it wasn't true.

Favourite line from Chapter 29 (hey that rhymes!): 'Her feet twitch and her breathing is psychotic, but she seems frozen in slumber, unable to force herself awake.' - such a powerful image in my head, and one I know well. The word 'psychotic' makes it incredible for me...

Mama as a song-title was amazing - I've been listening to that song a helluva lot lately ^_^

Hmm...song suggestions. Well if we're talking MCR - I'd say 'Drowning Lessons' since that's the other song I'm addicted to lately. Or maybe 'All The Rage' by Funeral For A Friend if you've heard that...or possibly something by Linkin Park maybe? Like 'The Little Things Give You Away' or 'From The Inside' or 'A Place For My Head'...?

I'm probably being epically useless by suggesting stupid songs, or songs you've not heard. I'm gonna go and take my uselessness elsewhere... :/

P.s. You. Rock. <3 <3 *huuuuge English-y epicly awesome hugs* xx

PAGE CLAIM, HELL YEAH!

mibba hath sassed you, they didnt let u put the whole title up :)
hey, girl, chin up. imma find those 2 idiots and attack them. SPARKLER HEART STYLE. ;)
and dude, this is acually one of my favorite chapters so far. the green day connection was AWESOME. especially with the evil jimmy and tatoo: genius.
and i like how she punched frank. that was... appropriate XD
im scared for next chapter cuz uve told me about it, but judging by the fact that you're pairing everyone up, i know you'll pull through it...
...right?
O.o
BTW THIS STORY IS AMAZING IF I HAVENT TOLD YOU THAT, U BLOW ME AWAY WITH UR SKILL.NEVER FORGET THAT. I LOVE YOU.

and as for one-shot suggestions, i got nothin. sowwy

You lost two more subscribers?!?!?!?! That's horrible!!!!!!! DX DX Well, if it makes you feel even the slightest bit better, I got extremely happy when I saw that this had an update =] And I like that chapter, like, a lot ^_^

Let's hunt down those idiots who unsubscribed!!!!!!! X]

To answer your question: Desert Song by My Chemical Romance? If not, then Vampires Will Never Hurt You by MCR or Hello by Evanescence ^_^

I meant Chapter 28 haha

I. Love this!!!!!! Ahahahahahaha I'm gonna have dreams of this tonight ^_^ Heehee... Anyways, It's weird, because this is actually how I kinda think! It's, it's like you read my mind =O Haha anyways, I love how you described why they can't be in love yet =] You were right, Chapter 8 was awesome, my dear!!!!!

I love the back story you gave about why Whatsername can't talk. It was very detailed ^_^

I always read your A/Ns! They make me laugh most of the time =]

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE SHOUT OUT, LYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I officially love you forever X] Heehee

More soon, please? =]

I actually gasped and yelled bastard at the screen as Jimmy slashed her throat. That bastard - I hope he gets something nasty coming to him if it hasn't already! *Curses repeatedly to myself about how much of a motherfucking cunt (and other variations of that) he is for doing that...*

Loved the back-story. Loved the way Gee and Vi aren't ready yet to be together, because they're afraid - but that they are still so close. Everything you do you handle with such elegance and precision...it's quite simply brilliant. Hence why I fucking love reading this story.

Favourite line of Chapter 28: "Without color, without feeling, we’re not even living." - you got that right.

P.s. The word 'Infallible' is in my notebook of my favourite words in the whole entire world...and I maaaay have squealed like a gurly-gurl when you put it in at the end.

P.p.s. I ALWAYS read your A/N - and I like how talkative you are. I'm the same haha :P

P.p.p.s I don't even know how to thank you for the story shout-outs...but dude, basically you rock. *Wishes that Green Day whizz over to your house at some point in the future and play you a special set of all your favourite songs...to be joined later by the gorgeous guys of My Chemical Romance - and lots of special Ray hugs and hair-touching sessions* ^_^ xx <3

This made me laugh so hard, my sides started hurting:

I blush. “Okay, not one hundred percent. More like ninety-six.”

Mikey giggles. “That’s sixty-nine backwards.”

Yay, more updates!! I'm having this feeling that the dreams Gerard is having are eventually gonna bleed their way into reality, but I could be wrong.

My internet has sucessfully let me on Mibba to read the last two updates you did - so I shall comment quickly before it dies again....

Favourite line Chapter 26: "Love is stupid, green-eyes. It’s never real, and it always leaves you broken up. And, usually, without words." - That's my kinda thinking. Also, Green eyes are amazing ^_^

Favourite line Chapter 27: “You’re the last inferno. Once you finish burning, the fire will be dead. But we need your fire, Inferno; otherwise we’ll never win.” - because I pretty much stared with my mouth wide-open at the epicness of that explanation.

Writer's block needs to go die somewhere...my internet needs to stop dying...my head needs to shush-up, and luckily this story calms me somehow. Even when bad shit is going down, the way you write just tends to silence any dumbness going on in mine. That's a talent and a half to have Lys - so I hope your writer's block (and mine) clears up damn soon!

<3 <3 <3 *hugs* xx

Yesh, I am very proud of you!!!!!! ^_^ Ahaha Oh my gosh, I love how you went about with my character and Gee =] I love it!!!!! Yesh, well, update soon!!! (I shall be waiting ^_^)