I Believe We're The Enemy - Comments

ALYSSAAAAAAA!!! i love you! that long paragraph about me made me sound very... rosy :) that made me happee. omg u fainted? IM GOING TO PLAN THAT INTO UR LITTLE RAY SHENANIGANS hehe
i miss you i miss you
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i liked this chapter. gee and last inferno are so fairytalish. its adorable. and dude, how r u so good at kissing scenes and u havent even kissed? ur so amazing! once u kiss someone ur gonna hav hella experience from ur own mind (sounds dirty lol)
i was going to say something. say something? eh. no.

Ray and Ginny are back together! Ray and Ginny are back together! Ray and Ginny are back together!! As you can probably tell I'm very excited that they're back together.

I'm also happy that Mikey finally got what he wanted ;)

I forgot to comment!!!! O_O

Anyways, ahahahahahahahaha drunken state X] Heehee that whole part made me laugh my head off!

Haha finally!!!! You've been torturing us with the whole Mikey and Rose scene, and it finally came!!!!!! ^_^ Hehehe

Love,
Your friend with the impatience of a child, A.K.A. Lexxi =] ♥

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ps. i know this is a tame comment. if u could truly express how much im freaking out right nowFWOJENGOJWEBRWEHRJKWENFIWNFOWEFNWRGN. i cant
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Heehee oh, Gerard, he gets so overworked over everything =P Buuuuuuut I love him anyways ^_^

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA FINALLY THE MADNESS OF THE FIGHTING IS OVER BETWEEN GINNY AND RAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That made me happy =]

Frankie is simply adorable X]

Okay, now it's Mikey and Rose's turn!!!!!! BRING. IT. ON.

xoxo
Lexxi ^_^

That...was a fucking great chapter.

(You can take that as a pun if you want to - your choice)

Ray.Love. Makes me happy. Yum-yum-yum...he got some action :D It was so perfectly executed by you...not overtly brutal or gratuitous - but dang exciting and awesome at the same time. I wish I could be more eloquent with what I think from reading this chapter...but that's all I can come up with right now :/

Hmm...do I sense that Gee and Inferno will sort themselves out soon. Will there be a Killjoy baby? And where is lovely Grace?! :P Can't wait to see what comes next ^_^

I don't want it to be over though. Just thought I should repeat that.(I'm sure I've said that to you, and if not - I've thought it.)

xx <3

dont rush it! or i will KILL you!

hehe. safe to say i loved this. ginnys so damn skinny tho, u shoulda mentioned that. and i know that whole shenanigan was an apolog fuck, buttttt the feminist in me says RAY YOU BITCH GET DOWN ON YOUR KNEES AND APOLOGIZE. im still mad at him. and ginny... but shes a blubbering blubbber bunny. without the blubber.
dyan is sitting next to me. i think im scaring him :)

hi.....weird and scary chapter thingy
that was dylan. i tried to sheild him from the sexiness. his naivety is quite damaged. but he'll ALWAYS BE MY WIDDLE BABY <3
anyhoo.
<3

MEEEEEEEEEEEEP!!!! GEE WOKE UP! HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY DANCE!!!!
everyone was so chill about it tho. and why the fuck does ray only listen to g? grrr. idiots.
"when r u gonna learn to forgive yourself, ginny?" wooooooaaaah. ginny and i hav something in common... O.o
anyhoo.
IMSOHAPPYGEEISBACK<3

YAY!!! Gerard finally woke up!!!! Ray's gonna try to talk to Ginny!! Mikey's not flipping shit anymore!!! Last Inferno and Whatsername are okay!!! I knew everything would start to come back together once Gee woke up!!

You scared me so badly when I read "It's over!! I'm done!!" All I could think of was "FUCK!!!! IT CAN'T BE OVER!! But then I read further and I calmed down. I have never had that quick of emotion changes ever! You're going to Alabama!?!?!? I live in the Northern part of Alabama!

I just realized I used a lot of fuckin exclaimation points in my comment!

I MISSED YOU TOO!!!!

GeeIsAwake...GeeIsAwake....GeeIsAwake...GeeIsAwake...GeeIsAwake...GeeIsAwake!!!

*Ahem*...needed to get that out. Basically - YAAAAY!!!

Favourite line from Chapter 35: 'I can’t ever remember the sun being this bright, or the world so fuzzy, or my stomach so empty.' Beautiful and epically awesome way to open the chapter. Plus, I was hungry at the time, and even if this next bit I say sounds bad - I felt I could relate :P

And Last Inferno and Whatsername are back! This also makes me a very happy bunny. I wonder why people chose to say 'bunny'...how about a happy badger, or a happy hedgehog. Yes, I like the sound of hedgehog (rambling again, I must control this...) - so anyway, I'm glad they're back - and Ray is plucking up the courage to talk to Ginny about it all :]

Great update - and reading 'Gerard's POV' made me all tingly with contentment inside. Yes, I said tingly...this is what your writing does you talented literature goddess!

<3 youu!! xx ^_^

MY GEE IS AWAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved the chapter, and I hope Ray and Ginny work things out big time =]

*Wooop! Page 5's comment cherry popped*

xx <3 ^_^

Whoa. Literally...just whoa. *Composes self to deliver a more detailed comment...*

Favourite Line from Chapter 34: “Mikey,” I sigh, “despite your miraculous wooing skills, I can’t just forget about everything that easily.”
 There is no way I'd turn down Mikey's wooing skills. Or Ray's. Or Frank's. Or Gee's. Or even Mike the drummer ;-D This line made me giggle immensely.

And then...DUH DUH DUUUUHN - you went and made it all dramatical and gloomy and dark and...wonderful. I don't know if this makes me sound mean, but I like that things are kinda falling apart without Gee, while he's in his coma. It's realistic and not sugar-coated like 'la la la,our best friend could be dying but we're all happy'. Doom and gloom make me unreasonably happy...I'm not.sure.why.

I don't want your story to end...but I trust you when you say it's nearly there, because I know you'll do it wonderfully. Also, I loved the video of you singing and playing - that song is my leaver's song too, so it brought back nice memories. Even though I generally hated the place. And felt oddly relieved on my last day, instead of sad. Ahh well...

xx <3 you lots and lots

P.s. Sorry about my lame rubbishy-update-ness. Things have been...kinda hard here - but I don't wanna make excuses. Let's just agree I'm lame ^_^

Okay, I finished the rest of them. Everything is falling apart piece by horrible piece. I can't believe Ray accidentally slapped Ginny, nothing seems to go right for him lately! I hope last inferno and whatsername get back safely.

Aw, sadness X[ But I hope Lariah's words get to Gee <3

You were lovely in that video, by the way! ^_^ I love your singing voice!

i didnt enjoy that
it was sad
i literally gasped and had to keep myself from punching the computer when ray and ginny grrr.........
i liked how u ended it tho.
im having gerard withdrawl

HI! Yes, I'm still reading this. My interenet has been out for awhile, and I couldnt read/comment your story =/ (Stupid fuckin storms!) I'm gonna try to catch up really fast though! I feel so bad for Ray. I love his descriptive little self too.Gerard needs to wake up asap and fix everything! Ginny is starting to worry me with spending so much time with Frank(I just finished reading Ch. 32)

that dream sequence scared me. why didnt u warn me?

gee wake up.
NOW.

and ray, GET THE FUCK OVER YOURSELF!!!!!

and everybody, just be happy again... ;'(

Oh, and I was sadenned by this chapter.... I want my Gee to wake up X[

YOU RECOMMENDED MY MIKEY STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW ITS NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

P. S. You're in the next chapter. Briefly, but you're there X] It's all part of our plan of getting you and.......... You know who together ^_^