Pretty Follies - Comments

love the update :D

OMG this story can't end!!! It just can't!!!!
Okay....it has to end sometime, but still. I REALLY don't wait it to :(
It just gets better and better with each chapter!!!!
I can't get enough of it.
I love how the bantering back and forth has gone to a minimum and Alex and Lorraine are more worried about each other than thinking of the next come back to say.
It's really nice to see. :)
I'm curious as to how this story will end. I'm hoping it ends on a good note!!

I feel that Alex has been the nicer one between the two to be honest. I just hope Lorraine sees that Alex isn't trying to be rude to her anymore. The way you write his point of view has really shown that he cares for her despite all of the rude things they've said to one another.
I don't think I mentioned this in the last comment, but it kind of upset me how after Alex thought all of those nice things about her and was trying to be civil, she just gets angry over nothing. Maybe it isn't nothing. I'm still kind of confused about that part. I guess, like you said, I'll figure it out in the chapters to come.
Anyways, this story is unbelievable. In my opinion, it's my favorite one you've written so far!! :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Please update soon :D
Idk how much longer I'll be able to wait. Seriously. lol

I absolutely love this story! Have I mentioned that I love that this is in Alex's point of view? Cause I do! I don't know what Lorraine's problem is, but I hate how mean and bitchy she is to Alex all the time. There's something there, something that happened between the two(?) cause I find it odd that two people just right off the bat don't like each other. Either way, their banter is always fun to read and their whole situation concerns me and intrigues me. I really want them to get out alright, but I also like how this whole situation is making Alex a bit nicer. Hopefully it rubs off on Lorraine. Just ugh, she annoys me to be honest. I love her independence and all, but i don't know what it is, I just feel like she needs to suck it up and deal with the whole situation, Alex included. I really do like this whole compassionate side of Alex. I'm curious to see where you're taking it. I'm really excited for the next update!

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<3
Henrietta
but no!
ALEX DON'T DIE
DONT DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

seriously one of the best stories i've read on here! more soon?

Love it <3

okayokay, so, back to my previous comment about them having sex in the woods. if that's what 'scrambling together' is, i'm going to be a little creeped out. y'know, because of the dirtiness and all of that glorious stuff. still, maybe they'll quit their bickering, get all their feelings out in the open, and realize that they'd been walking around in a huge circle and that the car was there the whole time.

or not, i don't know.

perhaps! perhaps, they're so defensive around each other because of hurt feelings. maybe that's why alex likes bothering her. it could be like those cliche kindergarten theories about boys bothering girls they like.

oh, well. update soon!

UGHHHHH. I was extremly suprised (and happy) when you updated, but FOR REAL? I thought that there was a slight possiblity that they might start to develop a freindship, of sorts. BUT NO. Deprive me of happiness, that's cool.
Nahh, jk. I'm just worried you might not update soon and then I'll have to wait to understand what the hell all this seed buisness was REALLY about.

So, the conclusion to this pointless and super dumb rambling? UPPDATE SOON.

And hey, whatever it is that you're dealing with, we all love you and I hope you sort stuff out. Low points are followed closley by high points, right? Chin up:D

Your analogys just amaze me!!!
You do such a great job of comparing things that it's so easy to understand the explanation of it, you know?
I loved that moment between them!! But then was utterly confused as to why she got all mad.
And then even more confused when Alex said "Oh I'm sorry. Didn't you know? I was mad at you because you didn't remember what I had for dinner on January 22, 1998." Was that Alex who said that? Maybe he was just being saracastic because he had no idea why Lorraine got all pissed off lol.
I really enjoyed what Alex was thinking and it was nice to know that he could be nice to her and thought of her without being a bitch about it.
I'm really curious to see where this goes now!!! ahhhhh!!!!
Please update soon :D

p.s. if you ever want to talk, I'm here. Just thought I'd let ya know :)
I hope you are better!!

first off, the whole bed analogy? fantastic. it's super spot on, really. but then when she got mad about the whole 'starting to eat seeds again' things, i was so confused that i had to re-read the whole thing twice. like, i was ridiculously confused.

but this killed me: "Oh I’m sorry. Didn’t you know? I was mad at you because you didn’t remember what I had for dinner on January 22, 1998."

it was nice (: i like seeing them together, but i wonder how much longer they're going to be creeping around the woods. and even then, if they make it out of woods, how their relationship will change. because it has to change somehow. update soon!

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Love the chapter. They are both so goddamn bipolar! It's driving me insane. Update soon please <3

AW! I was so happy they were talking civil!
I wanna know when she started nomming seeds again :D
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UPDATE! X

oooooooookay, so, when alex called lorraine 'stalin in woman form', i cracked up really loud, and right now, it's 3:45 am- and i'm pretty sure i just heard my neighbor ask someone what 'that noise' was.
anywho, i lovelovelove this <3 however, if they're still lost in a couple of chapters, and they end up having sex... i'm going to cringe a little, because i get the whole 'heat of the moment' junk, but the forest is dirty. i'd rather wait then risk getting bit by ants or something.

that was weird.
anyway, update soon!
and congratulations on graduating!
and i hope they get out of there soon!

YOU'RE BACK! I love this story and I'm glad you're going to keep writing! So, uhm, yes.This story is still KILLING ME, because I really wanna see them end up together. But, great writing as usual. UPDATE QUICK.<3

LOVED the update :D

Congratulations!
I think everyone understands about taking a while to update. You only graduate once(:
Well..you know.
I'm happy that you've updated though because I'd be lying if I said I hadn't been looking forward to an update.
So glad that Alex actually remembered something useful and now they have hope. Hope's always good.
Update soon?

Congrats!!!! :D I completley understand about not updating....I know how busy you must have been because I've been in that same position.
I can't agree enough with a.lovely.disaster's comment....you're writing never fails to amaze me and like you said in your author's comment, I hope you never stop because you're too amazing to stop. I'm SO happy you updated though because I've been looking forward to reading the next chapter for a while now. A smile came on my face when Alex remembered something about a river. I'm happy that they actually have a little bit of hope now that they know where they're going, or at least somewhat lol.
Looking forward to the next update!!

CONGRATS GRAD!!!!!! You're a high school graduate! How do you feel? Did you decide on a school for sure yet? How'd Prom and all the other end of the year stuff go? I hope you're living it up because Seniors truly deserve it.
I'm truly, truly curious, can you just conjure up these complex vocabulary words out of the recesses of your own mind or do you find them just for this story?
Other than that, I LOVE this story! They finally have a lead! I got so excited when I read that! I'm honestly hoping that they'll grow to be civil to each other but I would like to see a twist as well where they don't get along to the very end. At this point, I just really want to make sure they get out alive.
But honestly, I love the way you write. It's so amazing, and entrancing and I just fall into the story when I'm reading which I feel like is one of the greatest accomplishments of a writer. Well rest assured, you've achieved that a long time ago. I'm honestly thrilled for the next update!

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I hope they find the stream