Pretty Follies - Comments

Comment Swap brought me her and I actually love the beginning of this story and the first chapter just left me wanting more! I also love All Time Low so that's a bonus. :)

This is honestly the best story I have ever read, you're a really amazing writer! This is honestly such an incredible story. Do you think you could recommend me any AG stories similar to this one? Thank you if you do but don't worry if you can't think of any. This is such a great story I really enjoyed it :)

Just read through everything....this story is AMAZING! It reminds me of this stupid book I had to read a couple years back about a plane crash, and the boy that lived had to survive on his own in the forest. This was soooo much better though! Like DAMN, why couldn't we have read this instead haha :)

I'll admit, I was immensely confused with the last chapter. I guess I went into it thinking it was going to be in Alex's point of view and it didn't start making sense until she leaned down to smell the flowers or something. But, I couldn't have imagined a better ending to this story! I loved every second of it! I love how cutesy they are and how close they've become. It was the perfect wrap up chapter that was just too damn adorable. I would honestly right more but I'm at a loss for words at how amazingly well this story was written and just everything! You are such a talented writer I just...gah! There are no words for it. This story left me speechless.

i'm commenting as i read this and catch up, so pardon stupidity. thoughts running through my head as i read:
-ohhh, alex wanting to kiss lorraine made my heart skip a beat (:
-aw, they discussed everything! that's so cute.
-OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, THEY KISSED, OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. IF I COULD MAKE THIS TEXT BIGGER I SO WOULD BUT I FORGOT HOW TO. OH GOSH.
-are they going to have sex in the forest? i called this shit, oh god. they better not... sort of. oh, they didn't. well, that's good.
-is he dying? i hope he doesn't die.

the last chapter was refreshing, actually, because it was in lorraine's pov. i've always wanted to hear her thoughts... or rather, read them? whatever. the toucan thing was adorable, as was alex's love for all of lorraine, as well as lorraine in general <3 like, it was too cute. and this: 'sex on the forest floor.' i called that. it will happen beyond the story, i think. maybe, maybe not. still, i think this was a really good ending. it tied everything together nicely (: i'm totally reading your stuff from now on <3

aaaaand thanks for writing such a great story. seriously. you're amazing.

This story was beautiful and my favourite on here.

love the ending :D

Love it <3 That was just so perfect <3

Best.story.ever!!!!<3

I might just cry. This story is over. This is the first time I actually have stuck with a story, from the very beginning. Normally, I find a completed story and read it, beginning to end, but no. I've loved this story from day one.
This last chapter was so. fucking. cute. I keep re-reading this over and over and OVER again. Pleaseeeee start a new (Gaskarth?;) story soon. I love you and this story to peices and I'm REALLY sad that it's over. There was a HECK OF ALOTTA sexual tension in this chapter. So, thank you, for making me realize, once again, that I'm a sex-starved teenager with no one.;) But really. You are a GREAT writer, and I hope you continue to for a LONG LONG LONG time, and no matter what, I'll continue to read and comment on your stories.

Great job wrapping this story up! WRITE AGAIN SOON PWEASEPWEASEPWEASE.<3

I shower you with endless hugs and cuddles.
I love you for writing this story okay?
I LOVE YOU.
The ending made me get a big goofy smile on my face.
I am incoherrent and squealing.
You have made my day.
Now.... UPDATE BANDAIDS PLEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSEEEE!!!!!!!

Wow. Again, you made me speechless with your writing.
I really couldn't have thought of a better way to end it. It was beyond amazing <3
I definitley wasn't expecting a nice ending to be honest with you. However, I'm very happy that it ended like it did.
It was so great to see both Laney and Alex grow closer and closer in each chapter and to follow them through there journey of finding love.
I really don't even know what to say. You just wrapped up everything so beautifully. It was just perfect.

This story was by far my favorite story I've ever read on here. You did such an amazing job with it. I'm looking forward to reading your other stories :)
Again, I'm sad to see this story come to an end, but I'm very happy it ended on an awesome note!
<3 Kelsey

I'm truly sorry I haven't been commenting on the last few chapters, it's just that I've been waiting until the end. So, here it is:

I loved the story and I think you did a great job with the ending. I enjoyed reading this because it isn't cliche, and it is better than a lot of Alex Gaskarth fan fictions on here. I will definitely be looking for others of yours(:

Thank you for writing this and finishing it like you did

THAT WAS AMAZING! ahh! i loved it! i really thought he was gonna die. so once the begining was in laney's point of view i totally freaked. hehe. it was great. the ending was so adorable.

I don't think you could have ended it any better. <333
You did such and INCREDIBLE job on this story :)
I will definitely be reading anything else you post :)

“If I was a Toucan,” he tore his eyes from the busy bird and turned his head to me, who was still looking at him. “I would toss berries with you.”

i awed out loud at that part lol i loved this story a lot and i'm kinda sad to see it end, but you did a great job finishing it :)

I love this chapter so much, but the end is freaking me out. What's wrong with Alex? Update soon please <3

ftjskhgsjehjrnnhf
NIOOOOALEEEEEEEXXX
DONT DIEEEEEEEEEE
oh my gosh
nonononononono
abdmdmnmd
but they kissed!!
and are all cuddly now!!
which is good
but Alex is not allowed to die
okay
Alex no doe
ever
HE IS IMMORTALLLL

AWWWWWWH.
That was so cute!
:')
Dont Let Alex Die D:

OMGSH! I thought that was th last chapter and I nearly cried now I'm think of all the endless possibilities like will they get out? If they do, will they still like each other? Is it just a show of comfort because there both in the same situation? Are they just delusional? Is Alex dead? AHHHH!!
Please update extremely quickly or I'll cry!