Pretty Follies - Comments

OMILORDDDDD! I have no words. THANK YOU SO FUCKING MUCH FOR THIS CHAPTER. That is all. Thankyou. <3

THEY KISSED!!!
YAAAAY!!!!
<3333
sooo ready for the next chapter :)))

OH MY GOOOOD
YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS RIGHT NOWW
THEY KISSED
OMG
I CAN'T BELIEVE THEY KISSED
AHHHHHHHHHHH
YESYESYESYES
YES!!!
UPDATE!!!!

:D They kissed! Finally!
-.- Seriously, if this is all just a dream I'm gonna freak. That cannot happen!
Love the chapter, I really like the title. (Maybe because I'm listening to "Freaking me out" by Simple Plan ft Alex right now). Update soon please <3

OH DEAR LORD ALEX, KISS HER ALREADY!!!!

That is all I'm going to comment. I want to make sure all of the emphasis and leverage I have on this comment is focused on the above statement. Take that to heart, and update quickly, pretty please?

I REALLY don't want to see this story end :(
But I guess it has to come to an end at some point, right?
Do you think there might be a sequel?!
This is one of my favorite stories on here and I know I've said that about a million times.
However, it's true!
I LOVE it so much and get SO excited when you update again.
Anyways, I think you did a fantastic job with this chapter...like always.
It was awesome to see them being civil with each other.
Can't wait for the next update :D
<3 Kelsey

Finally they're not trying to kill each other! Yay!

No no
there aren't 3 chapters left
teres really 10 and then a sequel
you're just messing with our heads :D
and I personally really liked this chapter
especially when Alex got all lovey dicey for Lorainne
I think that's how you spell her name....
anywhooo
can't wait for the next TEN chapters darling
that's right
TEN
now you go and get on with those next TEN chapters :D

i think the chapter was great! can't wait to read the rest :)

love the update :D

I've fallen in love with this story :3
I reaaaallly want to see them together :)))
Great update; the background information really helps.

OH! THEY DON'T HATE EACH OTHER :}
this was so pleasant. like, super cute.

and i can't wait to read your johno one-shot!

Such a good chapter :D I looove this story :)

hehehehehe
YAY!
MAKE UP TIMES
HEHEHE
AND JOHN OHHHHH YEES
HEHE
<3
LOVE HIS STORY TO DEATH

They don't hate each other. That's a start. Amazing chapter, update soon please <3

love the update :D

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwww! This chapter was so cute! D:
I cant believe its gonna end :(
Updaaate sooooon :D
x

This story just keeps getting better and better. and I know, you're probably thinking "geez Kelsey, you've said that about a million times now" but I wouldn't be saying it if it wasn't true!
This was probably my favorite chapter to date! I just loved everything about it!
I'm very happy to see that they are starting to become civil with one another. I think they are starting to realize that there is more to their friendship (if you can call it that lol) than just bickering back and forth all the time. I believe that if they never got stuck in that forest to begin with than their relationship would still be the same. They would still despise each other. Getting lost in that forest has changed them, for the better in my opinion, and I absolutley love where their relationship is heading, even if they got lost along the way.

Okay, sorry for the cheesiness haha.
I'm VERY happy you are updating more frequnetly and can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
Great job with this story Emily :)
<3 Kelsey

loved the new chapter and the ending was cute haha and what alex has a crush on lorraine?! lol i hope their relationship keeps growing and that they make it out without fighting to the death :P

just started reading this and i've already gotten to the latest chapter. it definitely didn't pan out the way i had anticipated which is both frustrating and nice haha. i like the twists and the relationship between alex and lorraine. i really can't wait to see how it all ends...hopefully they actually get out of the forest and get those eggs? good job with this haha update soon :)