Break Apart Her Heart - Comments

Holy shit....she's gonna be yelled at >.< poor Dani....and knowing parents reactions like i do....her mom will be all like u cant date him, anyways plz update soon!!!

AHAHA ROFL
Loved the update!
XD It totally made my whole life. =D

great story :)
i am going ot suscribe
ut-oh thye are in trrrrooouuubbllleeeee :)

YAY UPDATE!

Oh nice! They go in trouble for looking like they were in a compromising position.
Love it..keep it up!

Bahahahahahahahah!
Ooooohh busted!!

AHAHAHHA
That made me laugh!
Some one's in troooooubleeeee (:

More soon?

Haha, good! XD

GEEZ.
Finally!
Yay.
Brilliant.
=]

^^ haha
that was an awesome chapter! =]

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and Mikey's all *FUNKAY CHICKEN!*

XDD!
updateeee!
I liked that one. =]
Like, Khorie's all :shock:
and Dani's all *KILLKILLKILL*
Frank's all *make out*
and Gerard's all 'Ohh...kay...'

lol poor Mikey...is gonna get the shit beat out of him again....anyways great chapter and plz update soon!!!!!

I'm sorry. I would've updated sooner, but I was having family problems. I'm hoping to get back into the swing of things, and update like I used to. We'll see how it goes though.

Thanks for all the comments already! Made mah day. ^_^

finally an update!
i love this story to death, but do you think you could pleaseee update more often?

Oh My Gosh.
This chapter mad eme laugh SO HARD (:

Update soon please (:

He stood with her and together, they danced on the tabletop, doing everything from the ‘Sprinkler’ to the ‘Lawnmower’. After a few minutes of making complete asses of themselves, they fell down on top of each other, giggling madly

haha, that made me lolz harcore!

The whole part did!

please update soon, i swear to god, i had a heart attack when i saw that this was updated!

I love it to pieces, please update soon

“Oh my. You look funny as hell doing the Funky Chicken, Mikes,” she informed him in between high pitched giggles.

I so just pictured the real Mikey Way doing the funky chicken. Oh the visuals.

Her hand touched something mushy and she suppressed a gag.

That is just so gross.

“You know, for a vampire, you fucking suck at lying.”

I think its hilarious that she always calls him a vampire.
I was so happy to see an update. I love this story like crazy!

OhMiGosh.
You are actually one of my favourite writers on here.
And you better update this one soon (:

I love it! Please update soon..... I knew Gee liked her!!! I just knew it!!! :D