Break Apart Her Heart - Comments

  • Adelaide

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    I jsut wanted to tell you that I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8D
    February 29th, 2008 at 05:44am
  • kathy r00lz.

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    Clap Wonderful. I can't seem to put any other words.
    That's how good it is. You're such a great writer, your type of writing should be like, trademarked.
    Seriously.
    February 18th, 2008 at 08:53pm
  • kobra kid

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    YES! FUCKING YES! FINALLY!!
    Oh yes me loves you for this now =]
    More when you can because you're officialy teh best x]
    February 18th, 2008 at 05:40pm
  • Springsteen.

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    FINALLY! YAYY!
    they're so cute together =]]
    February 17th, 2008 at 05:45pm
  • SNATCHLIPS

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    Yay!!!!!!
    They make a cute couple XD
    February 17th, 2008 at 10:00am
  • SarcasticNightmare

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    Awwww soooo sweet!!!!! Can't wait to read more...I already had to put it off for a while so my niece could type something...god she types slow....anyways please update soon!!!!
    February 17th, 2008 at 01:07am
  • Dementedspork

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    I loved that chapter!! It was great! Finally they are getting through to each other.

    Update soon!!!
    February 16th, 2008 at 11:41pm
  • The Nameless

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    I love how she beat him! Angsty love .-.

    tis the best
    February 16th, 2008 at 11:29pm
  • Rebel_Junkie

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    I love it!!! Write more!
    February 16th, 2008 at 10:58pm
  • Jasey Rae

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    omg you need to update again!
    February 16th, 2008 at 10:47pm
  • TRE.COOL

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    awwww, they finally said they love eachother ♥.
    Thanks for the update!!! More when you can, plz!
    February 16th, 2008 at 10:41pm
  • The Nameless

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    Hehehe that's too funny that you locked them in the closet together XD
    February 16th, 2008 at 11:20am
  • my-chem-is-my-life

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    ZOMG dude, i cant wait till the next part!

    More updates soon please!

    This is like my favourite story!

    Ever!

    Ever!
    February 15th, 2008 at 10:08pm
  • huh?

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    awsome update. cant wait to see how their cupboard thing is going to turn out!
    February 15th, 2008 at 09:49pm
  • Dementedspork

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    Great chapter!! I can't wait to see their POV's.
    February 15th, 2008 at 09:04pm
  • SarcasticNightmare

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    And yeah it did that to me too...it's cuz it was copy and pasted...
    February 15th, 2008 at 08:23pm
  • SarcasticNightmare

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    Lol yay!!!! Great chapter....lol watch when they get out of the closet tehy'll be working together to kill Khorie and Mikey....lol who knows if the vampire...er Gerard will be able to save them......lol please update soon!
    February 15th, 2008 at 08:23pm
  • SNATCHLIPS

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    Err...does anyone know why those weird symbols keep coming up?
    February 15th, 2008 at 02:32pm
  • SNATCHLIPS

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    he flipped the phone over so that he could angrily jab the numbers of the Stuart household. A not-so familiar voice answered.

    ”Stuart Morgue. You slice ‘em, we dice ‘em.”

    “Dani?”

    ”Who the hell is this?”

    “Gerard. This is Dani, right?”

    ”Holy shit! I didn’t know vampires knew how to use the phone! Yeah, this is Dani. I’m guessing you want Khorie, right?”

    ROFL!!!!!!!!!
    I laughed for ages after reading that!
    Yaaaay, they kissed!!!
    February 15th, 2008 at 02:30pm
  • Dementedspork

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    New reader! Awesome story. I hope to see an update soon! ::subscribes::
    February 12th, 2008 at 04:15pm