Break Apart Her Heart - Comments

that was cute lol ^_^

"You were staring. Why?"
"I don't know. I just think you are pretty."

I could just picture that whole thing it's so funny <3

amazzinggg

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
I'm so glad Gee got with Khorie
That's way cute
Thank you for updating
More when you can :cute:

EDIT: I totally agree with my-chem-is-my-life when I see you update Im like YESS!!! :XD XD

AWH, sweet love.
cute.

Can't wait for more.
=D

Im always excited when this story is updated! I love it! More updates soon please!

Awwww sooooo sweet!!!!! Great chapter, I was excited about this update!!!!! Anyways please update soon, and I absolutely loved this line, ”Holy shit! I didn’t know vampires knew how to use the phone! Yeah, this is Dani. I’m guessing you want Khorie, right?” lolz...I'm sorry but it made me laugh and had to tell you.....lolz anyways please update soon!!!!

I like this chapter but its really frustrating that he never tell her
Makes me feel like whacking him across the head
But I spose you cant really do that to a fictional character... well hes not fictional but y'know what i mean =]
More when ya can

So, is there going to be any vampire babies in the future?”
Rofl!!!!!!!!!!!!
Woooo Vampire babies!!!

i love it so much. i cant wait till you write more.

Awww! *melts* I hatre Frank, but i love the suspence! hahaha

Fucking awsome dude!

Awww great chapter, can't wait to read more...i love pillow fights lolz, anyways please update soon and i loved the crack about Vampire babies!!!! ^_^

Hahaha lolz, awww she was sooo close too...darn Gerard and she didnt even notice that he caught her around the waist.....anyways great chapter and please update soon!!!!!

LOved it!! more updates! I am addicted!

dude you rick!

Loved the last chapter!
Can't wait for more!

That was a nice update.
That would be mega embarrassing though. =/

More soon, yeah!?

He's a fool,
He needs to tell her he loves her
God who wouldn't love her?
I friggin' love her,
I love them both, they make me laugh :cute:

i love it!!
i cant wait till more chapters!

Go Dani!!!! I hope she totally walks back to the cafeteria bleeding like that so everyone could be like O.O at what happened and start asking stuff....cuz it's funny when ppl are like that cuz they get all defensive and such....Lolz, She'll prob be like "RAY DID IT NOW LEAVE ME ALONE DAMN IT..." ...eh wait that would be me....lolz anyways please update soon!

No no fucking no!
You're not confused
You fucking like him.
Get over it girl! ><
More soon? Need to find out what happens...

LOVE IT!!!

dude! fcuking awsome story!

Man, dude! Geez, Im addicted.

Updates sooooooooonnn please!!