Butane and Bullets - Comments

I was only five when 9/11 happened yet I remember it all It struck me at the time and well reading the first chapter has made me cry I just have to get myself to stop before I continue xx

amazing. keep at it :)

Love it, poor Gerard he can't have his own privacy about his 'relationshlp' with Kaye without people butting into it, anyhoo love this chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I missed this story! I was getting worried this was going to be a story that was never finished! Glad your back! Can't wait for the next update. :) <3

I've spent the last two days catching up on reading this. I think it's really well written. I'll be honest, the first few chapters were so heartwrenching, I almost stopped reading. I vividedly remember sitting on my sofa all day watching the news reports, watching the replays of the people jumping to certain death and the Towers falling, hardly able to tear myself from the screen long enough to simply go to potty.

The slow build up to the Frerard is great! I'll be honest, I don't care how wonderful or spectacular or *insert adjective* this non-girlfriend is or how happy she makes Gee, I want her gone! Frank will make Gerard infinitely happier! We all know this, so let's just say that out loud and not deny it!

I love all the accurate details about the guys and the start up of the band, too!! There are only a few things I have caught so far that I am trying my hardest not to correct. (My apologies! My OCD wins. 1. Frank worked at a drugstore, I believe, when Pency Prep was doing their thing, not a restaurant. Or maybe that was during his earlier years. But I know that was his first job. I'm not entirely certain of the chain, so I won't mention the name in my head. 2. Gerard had a car of his own at this point in time. He had a crappy, silver Subaru XT, by his own description. 3. Gerard was an intern at DC Comics. His postion at Cartoon Network was that of a paid illustrator. I'll stop with these three.) Please don't take this as any sort of criticism; I completely understand creative liberties! If you were writing this completely accurate (as far as public knowledge goes), it would be a biography and not a Frerard. (Well, I'm one of those that believe in RL, closeted Frerard, but let's not start that debate here.)

I'm going to be completely honest with you and tell you I suck at comments! And I rarely leave them, not because I don't think a story deserves it but because I don't normally know what to say. This is no exception! I mean, I've read thirteen great chapters and this is all I produce. (But funny, I can write tons of fanfics and masses of personal stuff about my stories in my author notes! *rolls eyes at myself*) I may not comment on every chapter, but I will be a regular reader. And when I have something to say, I'll definately say it!

Speaking of reading more, umm, you haven't updated in five months. FIVE! I demand more! NOW! (I'm kidding, REALLY!) But seriously, I would like to see this updated soon! As well as this is written, with the fantastic grammar and beautiful detailing and descriptions, I can't hardly wait for the Frerard to start! With her around, though, I get the feeling that's a good while away still.

I won't beat you for an update as you gave permission for; I'm going to take a different route: begging! PLEASE, PLEASE, update soon!! PLEASE?! (If I get on my hand and knees and grovel at my computer screen, would it help any? *grovels at my computer*) PWEASE?! *Frankie's puppy eyes*

:D I'm glad you like it. I can always tweak it if you want.

Awwww it's lovely :D Let's all thank St. Jimmy for bringing a bit of flare to the place!

Nananananananana LAYOUT! (Yes, it is the Batman song)

Hope you enjoy it :D

I'm awful sorry this got nicked. It's a tragedy and I hope the person who stole your work gets reported. In fact, I'll make you a deal: if you let me make you a layout for this, I'll report her and get her deactivated.

Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Hey, I've loved this story since you started writing. I herd you get ripped off bt I hope that doesn't stop you from writing because this is a really good fucking story. It's amazing and I hope some idiot doesn't stop you from writing it.

I feel so guilty for giving the other person the credit. Ugh I feel stupid. Your work is fantastic though, and I cannot wait to read more of this fic from the original author. You're amazing!!

That girl stealing your story was absolutely horrible, but I hope everyone who was reading it there will realize what happened and find this amazing piece of work. You're truly amazing and your writing is beautiful, realistic, and enticing. I cannot wait to read more. I'll definitely tell anyone I know about this story. Can't wait to read more from you <3

What that girl did to you is totally unfair. I mean seriously? All she could've done was asked to write a story with you or something, not steal your wonderful work. Dumb stupid bitch! -.-
I can't wait till you start working on this again!
:)
- Jenn.

So what that girl did is really shitty but, I love this story and I hope you update super soon!

xoalisha

this is one of the best frerard's i have read in a long time. please continue to update. :)

i'mso fuckinh excited!! an update!!! *dancing on my seat!!*
This story is great, is well wirtten and the charaters are quite real and interesteing. I love it.
I really hope the next update come up soon :D

*slap in the back of the head for making us wait 4 f*** months*

I missed this story.
It's just so awesome, and osdljhglbkxov xfc
Write mooooooooooooooooooooooooooore :3
XoXo.

Gah! you are not useless, this is just a fucking fabulous piece of fiction that takes ages to updated because, as Frank has said before, it ages finely like a great wine. This is fucking awesome. Take your time updating again, that last one was real long it made up for it.

Fuck, this is so good. Update more often, hun. <3 :)