Butane and Bullets - Comments

thx for the shout out bro!

Yes! You understand my username! Wow your one of the three people i've commented that have picked up on it and realised it's meaning :)
I'm glad my comment motivated you and I'm SOOO happy that you updated :3 cos this story is fast becoming one of my favourites ever, and I've read a ton fuck of stories so you should be really proud! So yeh, I love the references to real life gerard and real life frank, this story seems an awful lot more 'real' than a lot of the other stories and it just makes it more interesting and in a way believable because as a reader, and a fan of mcr, I know that this has happened.
Also please continue updating this story and I hope all the comments your getting keeps you wanting to update (and btw I feel so priviliged to be your first commentor on this story!)
Thanks for updating :) xx

This story is so unique! Truly one-of-a-kind. I've certainly never read a story so detailed and thorough as this. You've literally thought of everything and added it to this story.
I really admire your writing. I think I would've deemed this as being too hard.
You write this story so beautifully and well and in-depth that with each chapter I just sit here in awe.
Not only are you writing a story about an emotionally hard event, but you're writing about the beginning of the band and, really, the beginning of the story itself - cause without MCR, this story wouldn't be (I assume).
Also, what I really love about this is your writing. The way you're able to describe even the most subtle things so perfectly and so short and to-the-point truly inspires me. He smirked without a smile - When I read that, I had to physically test it, cause it sounded familiar but I just had to, and then I was utterly amazed at how precise a description that is! I also had to physically test out Frank chewed on the inner flesh of his upper lip to keep from arguing, and then I was completely taken aback at how an awesome way of shutting up and describing the act of keeping your mouth shut it is.
You truly amaze me. I hope you're okay with me promoting you a bit here and there. =D
Love it!

aww! made me cry! ah i love this story! it's really original and different and i love the way it's written!
xox
emz

this is great

this is making me cry
I just broke the keyboard with my tears. no joke.
I just snotted myself, im crying that hard.
my mum just asked me if im depressed (im normally really happy), im crying that hard.
i dont even know why this is so saddening.

this is FUCKING great

This story is fucking amazing! Why does it not have 10 stars?! Seriously?! It's so clever I love it, and it appears to be the most life like story I've read on here concerning my chem, cos as far as I know from interviews and such, this is what happened to them. Like frank standing in his garden, gerard going to work, mikey and gerard sharing a room. Also I like that 9/11 is the start of the story cos nows there's a concentration on it whereas the frerards that start in high school either end in high school or by pass the whole 9/11 start of the band and just dive straight into three cheers or sometimes even black parade! Like wtf? And bullets is one of my favourite albums of all time so by passing it seems stupid to me! Anywho rant over :)
I just wanna mention aswell that I think your story is really well written and I really enjoy reading it and I hope you update really soon :D
Thanks for posting this story
xx