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  • megan20089

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    I can't believe Zack. He's an ass, and not to mention acting like such a child.

    I can't believe he broke the pact that he and the guys wrote the summer of junior year--and he needs to open his eyes and realize that none of his friends even Valary and Michelle dislike Mariah.

    He needs to grow up and realize how Brian feels for him--before its too late... before Brian decides to walk out of his life.

    Loved it.
    September 3rd, 2011 at 09:54pm
  • rainydaydarkness

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    OHMY GOD ZACKY YOU FUCKING WHOREKJBASIB:ECKJBADCBJUWUCEC
    Fucking bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    grrrrrrrrrrrrr
    oh Brian you poor sucker :( I LOVE YOU BRI!
    September 2nd, 2011 at 09:36am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Zacky is being a such a jerk. I can't believe he went against the pact that he made with the others (pretty great idea the pact of course, not him breaking it lol) I wonder if anyone is going to somehow expose Mariah or get her to say something that Zacky won't like.

    Can't wait to read more :)
    September 2nd, 2011 at 04:46am
  • Through-the-Night

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    Oh my god, Zacky is being an ass! I know its a hard thing to hear, but you could at least listen, jeez. I wonder if anybody else will bring up the pact. I think it would be Matt or Val.

    And I love Michelle and Brian in this, I'm not sure if I ever said that. She's just so sweet! Although, I've been wondering how many people in their group know that the two aren't really dating. I know that you wrote that people just assumed and he didn't bother to correct them.

    I can't wait for the next update! Cheers love!
    September 2nd, 2011 at 03:27am
  • megan20089

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    Poor Brian. :(

    Zacky didn't have to be an ass--but he'll realize when its too late that he hurt his best friend... and that he was right about that girl.
    August 30th, 2011 at 06:58pm
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Love this story. Poor Brian though. Why does Zacky have to be an ass to him like that?
    Anyways hope you update soon.
    *subscribes*
    August 27th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • Through-the-Night

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    Yay! Now I can wait for the 'I told you so' although I think Syn would be too sweet to say that and although thinks it, would just comfort him and be a good friend-who-secretly-has-feelings-for-his-friend.

    Its been awhile, I'm glad you're getting back into this story. Cheers lovee!
    August 26th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • megan20089

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    Loved it. :)
    July 26th, 2011 at 11:39pm
  • majoji

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    I'm sorry that you're going through a rough time :( Just take your time and recover, relax and make yourself feel better! I'll wait for you :)

    Loved the update, as always.
    July 23rd, 2011 at 12:24am
  • palazzbm

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    loved the update :)
    July 22nd, 2011 at 05:36pm
  • megan20089

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    Love it. :)

    Hope Zacky figures out that he's hurting Brian's feelings...
    June 27th, 2011 at 05:30pm
  • palazzbm

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    loved the update. i can understand if you don't update often because of a sort summer though :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 02:59am
  • megan20089

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    update soon?

    I feel bad for Brian... :( I hope Brian can gather up the courage to tell Zacky how he feels. I also do hope that Zack returns those feelings.
    June 23rd, 2011 at 04:03am
  • palazzbm

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    i like the update :)
    June 7th, 2011 at 10:48pm
  • majoji

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    Aaaah :( Poor Brian, I really feel sorry for him ):

    I think it was an amazing chapter, I didn't mind how short it was, it actually made it better :)
    But that's my opinion ;p
    June 7th, 2011 at 08:51pm
  • majoji

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    yeah, that's what I'm talking about! Mwahaa, this is soooo gooood!
    April 25th, 2011 at 07:30pm
  • palazzbm

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    now we got some action in the story. cant wait to read what happens next
    April 24th, 2011 at 10:41pm
  • majoji

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    Hohohohohoooo, this is so gooood!
    Please update soon?
    April 9th, 2011 at 02:02pm
  • weirdatheart

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    Oh yay, Update soon <3 xox
    April 9th, 2011 at 01:32pm
  • palazzbm

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    Horny Brian is always sexy Brian and Zacky is just always sexy. Good work
    April 9th, 2011 at 12:24am