oh thank god. I thought you had just completely given up on this story. I was so happy to see you updated. And can I say that in the time you haven't been updating your writing has gotten soooo insanely good... not that it wasn't before or anything. Please update soon.
Wonderful update. My heart is beating heavily in my chest and oxygen is far from my lungs. This was breathtaking and I just about love everything about this story. I can't wait for more!
I LOVE HOW YOUR CHAPTERS ARE ALWAYS SO LONG, I SAVOUR THEM LIKE A COOKIE THAT I LOVE SO I'M NIBBLING IT REALLY SLOWLY. Anyway...
You know, I think Jamie is really really weird. So damn effing weird, actually :l BUT HE STILL MANAGES TO BE COOL. And I like the fact that he's so blunt about everything, aha! But damn, that chapter was intense, aha at how they were arguing and it suddenly turns into a make out session and then they're arguing again! And damn, I like Laura but I just wanna shake her at how mean she is to Reese sometimes, it's like, "Gurlllllll, he likes you, just get into his pants already!" ...Or maybe that's my overactive hormonal teenage girl imagination ;o Anyway, update soon? <3
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I just read seven chapters in one sitting and OH MY GOD DO I LOVE THIS STORY. I love love love love love love love love this story. I can't even put it into words. I'M JUST SO GODDAMN HAPPY.
i cant even type correctly from the shock of it all. holy SHIT! that was one intense chapter and i have tucked away in my brain! OMG! I GOTTA READ THE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP!
Aww, Laura's so reluctant to fall for him but she does anyway, because like, hello? Who can resist Reese's sexy charms ;) I sure as couldn't, I'm surprised it took Laura this long, aha! EEK, he asked her out. I'm excited for the next chapter, when they become official boyfriend and girlfriend :D Update soon!
So I have this major important test - actually two - tomorrow but I'm abandoning it for now to read this. HOLY SHIT MAN it's amazing. The way you write and word things - it makes me think more about the story and I feel like I can kind of relate to it in certain bits, you know? Not to mention Laura reminds me of a little like me so I feel like I can connect to her in a way.
REESE MUNN IS A SEXY BEAST. Scratch that, he's A SEX GOD. He's strange as hell but intriguing as well (haha that rhymed), his friends KELLY AND JAMIE I ALREADY AM IN LOVE WITH are funny and compliment Reese really nicely.
I have this feeling that Reese is going to be killed off in the end, and I really hope he doesn't because that would break my heart and tear it into little pieces. This story seriously pulls on my heartstrings like a mofo. Plus the way Reese and Laura behave around each other makes me squeal in the best way possible. Their chemistry is so strong and if I saw a couple like that in real life I'd probably be squealing too. Your wit is charming to read, and it's funny in some bits and just really witty in others.
Or if Reese isn't killed off in the end, then he's going to do something horrible to Laura like do what her dad did even though he knows about Laura's life story. I'm getting sad just thinking about it.
I adore this story to bits now. Will unpatiently wait for your next update and maybe I won't be making comments as detailed as these but I'll try, seriously harbouring a crush on Reese Munn and oh god, this is going to be one of those stories I'm never going to forget. It'll be the one I'll read over and over again, the one that even though this may have an unhappy ending I'm going to recreate my own ending to this.
If this turns out to be unhappy, the ending I visualise for this is that Laura and Reese don't get married - I feel this would be out of character - but Reese and Laura maybe goes on a world trip together and discover new things while Laura continues to come out of her shell? She should go bungee jumping, if that won't loosen her up then obviously the only thing that will be Reese.
And knowing that fact makes me super excited to continue reading this. This story is my lover, and I will make love to it through comments. Keep up the amazing work and I hope I didn't sound TOO creepy hahahaha <33