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  • dancingwithmydemons;

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    This story is just amazing.
    I can't even explain how much I love it.
    But I see now the drama has kicked in.
    Just...UGH.
    Please update soon!
    (:
    November 13th, 2011 at 01:06pm
  • laceyvengeance

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    Of course Kennedy told John she was playing him, but he didn't know that she had fallen for John...at least she told John she does, right? And Madison is getting the transplant..Hopefully, all the stress going on in Elle's life won't break her..but I have a feeling it will../:
    November 4th, 2011 at 10:11pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    yes!!
    she finally admitted shes in love with him!!!
    but why did he run off?
    shouldnt he be happy that she is in love with him!?
    <3
    November 3rd, 2011 at 07:00pm
  • Carry On Winchester

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    my heart is broke.
    November 3rd, 2011 at 05:03pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    I'm just not really surprised that John is angry at all. It does hurt for him and Elliot needs to understand that.
    November 3rd, 2011 at 05:55am
  • maddizzlle

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    noooo, thya have to be together! UPDATE PLEASE! i love this story!
    November 3rd, 2011 at 04:00am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    obvi, you know I loved it. Duh. Excited for the next!
    October 28th, 2011 at 09:13am
  • Caitosaur.

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    I'm reading like three of your stories and this one is by far my favorite.
    October 23rd, 2011 at 10:29am
  • maddizzlle

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    ohmygosh! i love it! update please, im obsessed :)
    October 21st, 2011 at 05:07am
  • Caitosaur.

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    Psht. whilethefirewasout is clearly on drugs.
    I love Madison dearly, but she's dying. And Kennedy will be a mopey shit.
    And right before she dies she'll say something painfully inspirational like "follow your heart" to Elliott who will be like "WHY YOU NO LIVE" but follow through with her words and be all gross with John.

    Or completely fuck up with John and then no one gets to be happy!
    yay?
    October 21st, 2011 at 01:37am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    ughhh noooooooooooo Kennedy is gonna be all sad now if she dies and she won't because she's gonna be miracle girl and eventually John and Elliot will end things on the worst terms because Elliot hasn't called off the bet thingamajig
    October 21st, 2011 at 12:40am
  • laceyvengeance

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    Maddie is dying?! D: Oh no..
    October 20th, 2011 at 10:16pm
  • Carry On Winchester

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    WELL THAT WAS SAD, DEPRESSING AND HURT A LOT.
    October 20th, 2011 at 06:10pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    DEAR GOD NO!!! SHE CANT DIE !!!!!
    THIS BETTER BE SOME JOKE AND THEN SHE IS GONNA BE ALIVE AND MARRY KENNEDY AND THEY WILL ALL LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!!
    <3
    October 20th, 2011 at 03:05pm
  • ItsLeoBiatch

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    Whoo... update!!!
    <3
    She's dying...? :( What? ... She knows she's dying. Sad.
    Keep it going!!!
    October 20th, 2011 at 12:13pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    what?! :(
    whats wrong with her ? :(
    <3
    October 16th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • laceyvengeance

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    If Madison isn't pregnant...then what's wrong with her????? I hope she's okay.../:
    October 16th, 2011 at 05:24am
  • Caitosaur.

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    Also,
    What do Madison and Elle even do?
    They aren't going to school, they don't have jobs.... all they do is hang out with the boys....
    Thought I'd point that out. Sorry for comment spamming. Apparently I can't handle getting all my thoughts in at the same time. For the record. It's 2:10 where I am. So I'm blaming California time zones.
    October 15th, 2011 at 11:10am
  • Caitosaur.

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    aw dude. I was like "goddammit. another story where someone gets knocked up"
    but now I'm like "WHTIEKUSHDGDKFGJ"
    So: what have you done to Madison?!
    October 15th, 2011 at 11:05am
  • Caitosaur.

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    at the beginning of the story you stated that Elliot has like. goldeny eyes, and in chapter seventeen they magically turn blue.
    thought you ought to know~ *faint prof Quirrell style*
    October 15th, 2011 at 10:36am