Picking Up the Pieces - Comments

I agree with perfect imperfection ^ Hehe

Ok seriously Lucas is getting on my nerves. When will this child get a flippin clue!? I swear if I were Jordan he would be on the ground holding himself in pain...ON a brighter note I loved seeing all her other friends again and that they are all getting married TOO CUTE!!! However I can't seem to remember who Jayden is!?!?!?

That Lucas needs a smack around the head, seriously. If I was her, I'd just pack it in all together, tell them where to stick that marriage. If he's going to be like that before and most probably after they get married, what's the point? They won't be happy and he'll be off gallivanting with other girls, screwing around. But I love this story like loads ! Update soooon please??? <3

Oh. My. F---. I swear if I were Jordan I would rip out his throat! Flaunting that girl, making a spectacle, and kissing her on the cheek just say she can't ride home with him because he's leaving with said girl? He would be dead. Absolutey dead. Dead as a doornail, like dust! Bastard... slimy arrogant twat... This aggravates me to no end! And that everyone is going into a happy marriage except her? I'd be in hysterics. I would run away and make sure I was un-retrievable, I would never lay eyes on Lucas, and perhaps the other friends if they flaunted their happy marriage at me! Arrg, this chapter actually seriously pisses me off!

Yummy CAKE!!!!!!!!!!

keep updating plzzzzzzzzzzz i'm loving this story even more.

Loved the chapter, loved the cake, loved the quip about the little brother, loving the suspense of her telling her friends!!! <3 Thaaaaank you for updating, update again sooooon! :D

Cant WAIT for the update :D
&& iThink You Love cake . o.o

Luke should appear out of nowhere when Jordan goes to tell her friends and be like, "Wifey!" That would be hilarious!!

finally :D love it btw <3

Wait a second, I thought Mrs. Travel's name was Samantha, not Julie

Woah. So weird how it worked out that Danny had to specifically marry Luke. Haha. Very unexpected. Loved Luke in To Break Her Heart when he was actually trying to change, but now he's just a loser.

i loved chapter 10, it was so good and showed so much girl power and every girl would do in that situation. keep updating plzzzzzzzz u r a kick azz writer

Luke is a jerk and i'd love to slap him!!
Waiting for another chapter... :)

update already pllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeeee

So, I commented a few days ago, and I'm like.. reallyy wanting to know what happens. Lol. Can't wait til you post the next chapter(:

really interested to see where this will go... subscribed.

I liked how jordan tried to get luke back made me laugh...HARD!!! keep up the awsome work

AHH! I'm in LOVE with this story and the characters! I can't wait til the next chapter I'm sure it will be just as good are even better than the last! (: Keep up the good work, you're doing great!

i lyk the new chapter but it was kinda weird because jordon doesnt normally act lyk that. it sucks luke is bac 2 being a player, anyway i <3 it n plzzz keep updating