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  • heytheredelilah

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    All your cake pictures are making me crave cake.... On a side note, wonderful story :)
    June 18th, 2011 at 05:15am
  • gcaprincess

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    You must give yourself more credit darlin! Your kissing scenes are actually very well written :) I applaude you! and I like this chapter a lot! :) Keep them coming!
    June 18th, 2011 at 04:40am
  • PixieChick101

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    love the new chapter, but i <3 the cake. Keep updating plzz. N im happy they are starting get over their issues over ech other
    June 16th, 2011 at 05:29pm
  • AllBecauseofYou

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    COOKIE!!!
    June 16th, 2011 at 05:42am
  • Unusually._.Usual

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    Oh! Btw, Jordan and Lucas, sitting in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-G! First comes marriage, then comes love, then comes Delilah, too big for her baby carriage! <3
    June 16th, 2011 at 05:35am
  • Unusually._.Usual

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    I would looove to eat that cake! :P Eeeee! They kisssed! Thaaank you for this chapter! It is coming along quite nicely :D
    June 16th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • gcaprincess

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    I was SOOO ready for that kiss :) haha
    June 16th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • perfect imperfection

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    I like it!!!! My favorite character is Luke's brother, he makes me laugh. And luke is just so stubborn, but then again Jordan is like twice as stubborn. Oh the drama drama drama.....keep it up!!!!
    June 13th, 2011 at 07:52pm
  • hiwagang hapis

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    Oh gosh.

    I've read the prequel and the sequel in one hour straight.

    Fudge. I even forgot to shower.

    Anyways, I love your story :D
    More I say! More!!!!!
    June 11th, 2011 at 05:27am
  • gcaprincess

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    Love it :D Keep up the amazing job! I cant wait to see what happens! I think I like the old Danny better than this one. and I like how Luke seems like he has changed a little. :)
    June 11th, 2011 at 12:16am
  • AllBecauseofYou

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    hahahahaha =)
    June 10th, 2011 at 10:28pm
  • PixieChick101

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    loved your new chapter so happy that they're getting along. keep updating please and what's with the pictures of cake?
    June 9th, 2011 at 02:44pm
  • TheLegendryELF

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    OMG! that was such a cute chapter! i'm glad they finally made up.. :D
    June 9th, 2011 at 08:25am
  • PixieChick101

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    chapter 5 wasnt that bad, it was kinda long though. But overall i liked it, i can't pick which jordon i like better until i see more of the new her. Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
    June 6th, 2011 at 03:32am
  • TheLegendryELF

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    i like the old danny better :/
    June 5th, 2011 at 10:49am
  • Unusually._.Usual

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    1. Yummy caaake!
    2. I kinda forgot what the conte- wait, no, I've got it! Hmm... I'm really busy nowadays with projects and exams, but maybe afterwards I could find some time to write...
    3. Good chapter, but they almost seemed OOC, especially Lucas... and the scene in the bedroom was just a tad bit confusing... (:
    4. Updates? I wanna see them all lovey... but I have to wait was the plot progresses! <3
    June 5th, 2011 at 04:49am
  • hannahlovex3

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    lawl as soon as i saw hetrosexual bear wrestler i thought kevjumba
    June 5th, 2011 at 01:45am
  • PixieChick101

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    i like chapter 4 it's really good
    June 4th, 2011 at 05:18pm
  • Unusually._.Usual

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    That was a great chapter! I had actually forgotten about Lucas' relatives... But at least we got some information and an advancement in the plot! :D Pllleeaaasssse update soon? :<
    June 4th, 2011 at 12:34pm
  • perfect imperfection

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    AHHHH BAD DA BA BA BAAAAAA IM LUVIN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay luke has come baaaack!!!! Yippee skippy
    June 2nd, 2011 at 03:41am
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