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  • Im_A_Fan_Of_Myself

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    cant wait for more
    May 31st, 2011 at 08:32am
  • Hyper_Sprite

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    rofl I read chapter one and my face was like o-O. In the back of my mind, I kind of knew Jordan was gonna have to face Lucas again... but didn't think she'd have to marry him. I was leaning more towards Lucas going crazy and start stalking her. XD As I was readin chapter two, I half-thought Lucas was gonna run up to Jordan and hug her instead of slamming the door in her face. XD Reading chapter three... hmm... guess I'm not sure what to say about that. :P I loved your first story. It was awesomes. :D Write more soon or I'll pulverize you!! Naw, just kiddin. I'll just be very disappointed. :P The stories you write are unpredictable. x_X I have no clue what might happen next. Haha.
    May 31st, 2011 at 01:22am
  • PixieChick101

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    I like chapter 3, it was really good. I like the idea of having Luke's pov every other chapters. I kinda don't hate him anymore, but i kinda do, it's complicated.
    Anyway update soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
    May 29th, 2011 at 07:45pm
  • SimplyFaith

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    Ahaha. This is about to hav soooo much drama !
    May 29th, 2011 at 07:30pm
  • WaterWisp

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    WOO!!!! THE CAKE IS BACK!!!!!

    oh... and the story.... xP
    a Ha Ha HAAA
    brilliant first two chapters!!! I love these two stories if yours soooo much!!!!
    cake included ;D
    May 28th, 2011 at 03:37pm
  • PixieChick101

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    Damn! he went and slammed the door in her face, was not expecting that. Keep updating !!!!
    May 26th, 2011 at 10:36pm
  • Unusually._.Usual

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    Ooh! Ooh! I think that was me! To guess that it was an arranged marriage? Aww, Yeaaahhh! ^o^ Wonderful start! But he deserves a beating for slamming the door in her face... <3
    May 26th, 2011 at 12:54pm
  • JDFan18

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    I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! It's kinda depressing though... AM I A LOUD READER!?! I think I am!!! I love being loud, It's SO OBNOXIOUS! I think it's really funny to be obnoxious to snobby kids who think they're better than you... Lol
    May 26th, 2011 at 12:22pm
  • AllBecauseofYou

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    How rude of him.... MORE!!! please
    May 26th, 2011 at 06:55am
  • Little Robyn;

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    Hola! I read the entire "To Break Her Heart" and loved it! I love Luke. He's definitely my favorite character :) Keep up the amazing writing!!
    May 26th, 2011 at 06:16am
  • hannahlovex3

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    Oh my gosh thats effing hilarious when he slammed the door in her face roflroflrofl i legitimately am Cannot wait until the next chapter or anychapter with Lucas' Point of View
    May 26th, 2011 at 04:30am
  • Jolie Rouge

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    Luke needs to stop being a little whiney bitch....
    May 26th, 2011 at 04:29am
  • Emme31

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    AHHHHH!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!! Please keep going!
    May 26th, 2011 at 02:45am
  • PixieChick101

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    wow i kinda already knew what was gonna happen, but it still shocked me! anyway please update more it's getting good
    May 26th, 2011 at 02:09am
  • Jolie Rouge

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    whoa. o.o
    May 25th, 2011 at 06:41pm
  • JDFan18

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    OMG! LOVE IT! I cdidn't guess that there was going to be an arranged marriage... Am I a bad person??? :-l
    May 25th, 2011 at 12:23pm
  • Monkey_Business

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    i love the first story and i love the beginning of the second, keep up the good work and update soon pleasssssee!!!!
    May 25th, 2011 at 09:58am
  • Arizona.Beauty.

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    Now that was a shocker....shit's going to go down now haha. Love it. Update soon(: <3
    May 25th, 2011 at 09:21am
  • SimplyFaith

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    Omg! I never would have guesed that ahaha. Cant wait for more !
    May 25th, 2011 at 05:00am
  • kate_123

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    Man. I didn't see that one coming. Maybe I should have. Anywho, can't wait for the rest of the story. The last one was great and I expect just as much from this one. :)
    May 25th, 2011 at 04:09am
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