You must give yourself more credit darlin! Your kissing scenes are actually very well written :) I applaude you! and I like this chapter a lot! :) Keep them coming!
Oh! Btw, Jordan and Lucas, sitting in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-G! First comes marriage, then comes love, then comes Delilah, too big for her baby carriage! <3
I like it!!!! My favorite character is Luke's brother, he makes me laugh. And luke is just so stubborn, but then again Jordan is like twice as stubborn. Oh the drama drama drama.....keep it up!!!!
Love it :D Keep up the amazing job! I cant wait to see what happens! I think I like the old Danny better than this one. and I like how Luke seems like he has changed a little. :)
chapter 5 wasnt that bad, it was kinda long though. But overall i liked it, i can't pick which jordon i like better until i see more of the new her. Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
1. Yummy caaake! 2. I kinda forgot what the conte- wait, no, I've got it! Hmm... I'm really busy nowadays with projects and exams, but maybe afterwards I could find some time to write... 3. Good chapter, but they almost seemed OOC, especially Lucas... and the scene in the bedroom was just a tad bit confusing... (: 4. Updates? I wanna see them all lovey... but I have to wait was the plot progresses! <3
That was a great chapter! I had actually forgotten about Lucas' relatives... But at least we got some information and an advancement in the plot! :D Pllleeaaasssse update soon? :<
AHHHH BAD DA BA BA BAAAAAA IM LUVIN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay luke has come baaaack!!!! Yippee skippy