The Ultimate Bet - Comments

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Thank gawd that was a flashback chapter. I was like, What the fuck is Mikey saying to Frank?
I love this story! I love this story! I love this story!

I love this story! :D everyone is so.. evil :yah

*subscribes*

I love evil Frank :yah

Sexyness
haha
xo

I love evil Frank :yah

Sexyness
haha
xo

This story litterally makes me laugh my ass off.
:]

WOO! I was so happy this was updated! :D Its amazing and I love how you make your character stick to there personality and you dont change it so they can have sex and whatnot like alot of stories do these days. Cannot wait for an update.

I fucking love stories like these...when they have unexpected flashbacks and shit that you start comprehending little by little. Unfortunately, the story is not yet completed...and there are still several things I don't get.
But I fucking love the fact that you planned this chapter since day one. I haven't posted like, any stories. But I have some plots formed in my head, and I generally get ideas beginning with the end of the story. I believe that way you can't fuck up too much, y'know?
Well, anyways...I really hope you update soon 'cause I wanna know the whole thing. I'm specially looking foward to when Gerard accepts his own feelings...he does have STRONG feelings for Frank, doesn't he?
And I have to be honest with you, when I began reading this I actually thought it was gonna as simple as Frank discovering the truth but forgiving Gerard and the latter admitting his feelings. I'm glad I was proven wrong. Well, I congratulate you again and hope to see an update soon!

xx (I just noticed this comment is like, one of the longest I've ever written =P)

SO did they fuck? Or were they saying they did?

:tehe: That chapter was awesome. I understood it. I love how Frank seems to really like Gerard and always hoping and how Mikey tries to turn things his way to get with Frank. At least that's how I understood it. I could explain a bit more about what I mean but I have a headache. I'm really thankful that you updated, though, it made my day after having to babysit a demon child.

Ahhh! D: *sniffling*
Poor Frank. Gerard..... Errrg! >:/
JERK!

Bahh! Amazing! *claps*

yea i got a little confused...hopefully youll explain in the next chapter!

woahh, i would never had guessed this.
amazing.
simply
amazing.
i can't wait to read the rest.
and i think can't would be an understatement.

I don't get it.

At all.

I have no clue whats going on or what they were even talking about. I mean...I dont even know what I just read. I feel like I just walked into a movie an hour late.

The last two chapters confused me a little... I couldn't tell when certian events tooks place... >.>

AHH! This chapter is soo confusing. At least for me it is. I don't understand what Mikey and Frank did. Well, I understood what they meant to do, but not what ended up happening. And now the suspense is killing me. I want to know what made Frankie cry, poor boy. I hope all of that gets explained in the next chapter, or soon, because I'm so anxious to find out. Great chapter, though. :] I love your writing and the dialogue.

Ah Frank, I knew you were an EVIL genius behind those adorable glasses.
And yeah, this chapter surprised me, really good twist.

Thanks for the comments thus far. Aha! Another update! Sooner than usual, but only because I'm really in the mood to finish this fast and move on quickly. I shall miss it. A lot. I hope this chapter isn't too confusing. It's the first chapter I wrote, to be honest: I planned this chapter from the get-go.

Surprise? :cheese:

Or was this twist TOO obvious? I don't care because I'm love with my own story. Narcissistic? Obvs. :file:

Onward:

Major love to Marissa. Who rocks my boat of loove.

:arms:

P.S. Oh no. This isn't the last chapter. I lied. I'm bad at calculating chapters.

Awhh man... : /
I really really want you to carry on with this because it's a fucking awesome storyline. If you don't feel like writing as jinx removing said, don't write. It's not your fault if you have writers block or whatever. We'll gladly wait for another update. :]

Also, I loved it. It really made me laugh. Especially the prostate cancer bit, because now on TV suddenly everything is relating to it, and it keeps making me laugh. But yeah, update when you feel like it!

I'll hang around and wait :]
Love
xo

Awh, my bby.

Are you serious right now?
You know what to do when you don't feel like writing.
DONT WRITE

then im me and we'll talk for hours and you will hopefully want to write again.

^___^

ily muffin face!!

:-*

So Im totally bummed that there are only like two chapters left. But the chapters you have written are fucking amazing. So that makes up for it. :D