.... Not all of this is Brian's fault. She left him. He was doing something that he was asked to do. If its anyone's fault its kinda hers. But on a happy note! I'm glad you are back. I've missed this story!!
I absolutely love this story and so glad that you have written a chapter. I danced around for a bit when I saw that you updated and I loved the chapter even though this story is a little heartbreaking. All I want to do is give Erin and Brian a huge hug. Also I was wondering if you can make me a banner for my Brian story Abandoned? The story is on my signature :) thanks
Great update! I really hope Brian gets better soon,it's sad that he's just drinking himself to a point of no return. I get that he's being stubborn but he can't go on like that. Erin is doing all she can to talk to him but he kinda pushes her away :/ hopefully you update again soon!!!:)
I feel like there us so my guilt on Brian. He was only doing what he was asked to do. I think Erin should get more blame because she also broke up with him..
I feel like there us so my guilt on Brian. He was only doing what he was asked to do. I think Erin should get more blame because she also broke up with him..
You're back! Haha I'm glad you updated! I really liked the chapter. Matt was thinking of Caroline wasn't he? I honestly thought he was going to make a move or something. I liked how Erin had a good time on her date. Bobby's childhood was really sad, I didn't see that coming. I really don't like Kelsey, she is such a bad influence. I think in the moment he was staring at Erin he truly realized how bad he messed up. I think that's why there was such a harsh glare after he walked passed Erin and Bobby. I understand Erin saying she didn't know who Brian was anymore because, well let's face it he's been a total douchebag lately. I'm happy for Zacky and Lisa, the name they chose for their daughter was adorable and extremely sweet. I hope when the family gets together to listen to the songs that things start in the direction of getting worked out. I really wonder if a cat fight between Erin and Kelsey will happen or not. Amazing update and if I remember something I forgot that I wanted to comment on in this chapter I'll be sure to write you about it. AWESOME AMAZING UPDATE! I loved every minute of it.
First of all I want to say that you never disappoint me with your writing! I really love how you put details and emotions to portray the characters. Second, Brian really has a problem and I hope that someone notices and helps him before it's too late. I understand that he's hurt about Jimmy and Erin but he has to find another way of coping with his problems. Erin seems to be moving on which I'm happy for her but I'm also sad that Brian is going to be more hurt about this. It is kind of his fault because he kept on pushing her away though. Can't wait to read more!!!
You're right, I don't like asshole Brian. I like how you sort of incorporated Caroline from Give Into Me. I think Brian is starting to realize what he's lost. I think something along the lines of a fight might go down between Brian and Bobby. I think Brian using drugs as an escape isn't beneficial because at the end of the day reality always comes back. I hope someone helps him soon to get rid of the drug abuse because it isn't healthy. Fantastic update as usual. =)