Can't Deny It - Comments

  • i love it.
    it is a killer story so far adn yes she should kiss back and leave the butthole she is with lol....
    i'm so glad your staying for the time being cause i love your stories.
    ~Much Love Always- Mary~
    June 17th, 2011 at 07:58am
  • Loved the update! Hope another one comes soon
    June 17th, 2011 at 03:30am
  • I hope she kisses back :) lol cannot wait for more love it<3
    June 16th, 2011 at 01:47am
  • Thank you so much for sticking around! This story is Ah! I love and she better kiss back! :)
    June 15th, 2011 at 08:42pm
  • WOOP WOOP SEXY TRAIN LEAVING THE STATION
    THEY BROKE THE SEAL! DO HIM!!!
    hehehe
    loved it pheeb!!
    June 15th, 2011 at 05:41pm
  • Fabulous update..I have a feeling she will kiss him back but be a little upset about it. I had to laugh at the part about Primanti's and hangovers because i tried that over the weekend with Primantis and it didn't work..lol..can't wait for more!
    June 15th, 2011 at 02:36pm
  • Fantastic update.
    Love Engo and she really needs to dump that asshat of a BF.... he sucks!!!
    June 15th, 2011 at 08:31am
  • I love this story so much!
    She's going to kiss him back, for sure. :D

    You're a wonderful writer, and I can't wait until the next chapter!!
    June 15th, 2011 at 05:07am
  • So giddy when I saw the update for this! Great chapter...can't wait to see these 2 finally hook up!
    June 15th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • This is amazing, and you're truly one of my favorite authors. Don't let others get you down, you've got a lot of support from people who like your stuff, and that's all that matters. :)
    June 15th, 2011 at 04:24am
  • omg, i love it!!!!
    she better kiss him back!!!!
    can't wait for more!!!!
    June 15th, 2011 at 04:19am
  • This was a great chapter as always! I expect nothing less from a great author like yourself!

    I swear I sounded like a Beiber fan girl when I squealed aloud after they kissed! They're so adorable!
    I can't wait for more and keep up the brilliant writing!
    June 15th, 2011 at 04:16am
  • I love the kiss! :) :)
    June 15th, 2011 at 04:13am
  • Great update, and loving a story about an under appreciated d-man! Can she pllllease wake up and see the hotness that's in front of her, instead of Mr. old and boring... :)
    June 15th, 2011 at 04:08am
  • I think she's gonna kiss him back. So much sexual tension between the two.

    I'm happy to see that you're sticking around!!
    June 15th, 2011 at 04:01am
  • First of all, I love this story. I think Amelia should just stop playing and leave Jayson. Pft, I would've left him for Deryk in a heartbeat.

    Second, I love your writing and I'm sad to hear that you're leaving. I've read both Staal stories, yours and hers, and I can say that I didn't think of your story when I was reading hers and I didn't think of hers while I was re-reading yours. I don't think they're the same at all. My point is, I don't think the plagiarism stuff is warranted. Anyway, if you do end up switching websites, you should put a link up letting us know where you are, so we can continue to read your stories. (:
    June 14th, 2011 at 05:07am
  • I just caught up on this story and may I say I love it.

    Jayson is a dick and doesn't deserve Amelia, at all. She needs a guy that is going to love her and care for. Not someone who is going to control her.

    Deryk...what can I say about him? Umm HAWT!!! I can not wait to see what happens between he and Amelia.

    Lastly, I hope all the plagiarism stuff gets worked out. I hate seeing such a great author like yourself going through all this crap for nothing. You have no reason to be blamed for all this. I will continue to read and support all of your stuff.
    June 13th, 2011 at 05:35pm
  • So first off, I'd love to rip into Jayson and simply destroy him.

    Secondly, I'd love to rip off Deryk Engelland's clothes.

    Thirdly, I hate that everything has been happening with the plagiarism claims. There's no way you were the one in the wrong and I the fact that everything has been blamed on you is complete bull. <3 I'm here for you no matter where you post your stories, but I hope it's here.
    June 10th, 2011 at 01:31am
  • I love your writing. I haven't seen a lot of hockey, seeing as I don't have the tv channels that air it, but I think I would be hooked if I had, I like what I've seen in Olympics and national games. My point is that I don't know American hockey, so I therefore don't know the characters. Still, I adore this story, the personalities, the feeling a fan get when stepping on holy sports ground(reminds me of my love for Manchester United), the sexual tension that's so obvious that I myself can feel it. I don't care if other think plagarizing this or that, I really like your writing so I will continue reading your stories as long as they're there, and I truly hope you will shake off those idiots' messages and consider carry on posting stories here.
    June 9th, 2011 at 04:45pm
  • Okay...so I have decided that I really, really, really like Chloe. I see a lot of myself in her, as a matter of fact ;) She seems very feisty and assertive and confident, but I'm wondered if there's a lot lingering underneath that we don't know about her yet. Like maybe there's some kind of hurt in her past that she tries her best to cover up. You know what I think? I think she needs a man to come along and sweep her off her feet. Make her forget about all the bad shit. Show her that not all men are dicks. I'm sure there's someone that would fit the bill for her ;)

    “Deryk Engelland...resident ruffian.” LOL I don't know why that made me giggle so much, but I could picture her with this sly grin on his face and ruffling his hair. And the description that you gave of him was absolutely delicious. Aside from the smell ;) I could see him sitting there in those tight garments hugging his muscles, sweat soaking his hair and beading on his brow. That man is walking sex. No doubt about it. And I don't blame Amelia for having those kinds of thoughts about him.

    It was really really cute that Engo remembered Chloe's daughter's name. And really sweet when he replied with 'bold like her mother'. How well exactly do they know each other? There's something there. Something lingering between them that I can't quite put my finger on.

    I extremely enjoyed the conversation that went on in the diner. It was the perfect way to get to know more about Amelia (her desire to be perfect...which I suspect is all Jayson's doing) and what she really wants to do with her life when she graduates, her personality and how her parents don't like her boyfriend) and get some comedic relief with Deryk's shameless flirting. I agree with him and her parents, I don't like him either. I have a huge problem with men that want nothing more than to take women and transform them into their version of the perfect spouse and make them lose all essence of themselves. Totally pisses me off. Especially the ones who say they aren't doing that and they suck the women in by telling them everything they want to hear and then totally change.

    Deryk...there's something you're not telling us about Chloe. For some reason, I can't help but think things weren't that innocent.

    You must tell me what the deal is with Chloe's ex husband. I must know.

    Jayson is a dick. I don't want to hear any excuses about his job or anything like that. He's a dick, plain and simple. And she needs to dump the sure, secure thing and take a chance with Engo.

    Poutine. F*ck yeah, Canada!!!!

    All this sexual tension...all the flirty comments (and his bold one about her being stone cold sober when he gets her into bed)...I really can't take much more of this. LOL

    Jordan Staal...her sexual fantasy...that part made me laugh like hell. And poor Engo having to hear the details! LMFAO

    Love Engo getting all up in the scrawny boyfriend's face and telling him how it is. And Jayson better watch out, I'm sure Engo will take care of her just fine.

    Looking forward to more!
    June 9th, 2011 at 04:13pm