Can't Deny It - Comments, page 23

kare_bear (100)

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you already know how i feel about this story so all i can really say is
gimme more now please :) :) :)

May 24th, 2011 at 05:26am

RosiePosie08 (100)

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Freaking love this.

May 24th, 2011 at 12:47am

MissLis (100)

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oh jeeze now I'm all excited for that job too!
I'd give a lot to be able to see a Pens game in that arena, dude!

great beginning cannot wait for moooore :D

May 23rd, 2011 at 10:41pm

jen123 (100)

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good first chapter! cant wait till you update

May 23rd, 2011 at 08:21pm

sybilla1984 (100)

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You've got me hooked on the first chapter!!
Love it!!

May 22nd, 2011 at 09:16pm

Spanked by Bautista (100)

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Any story that starts of with smut is going to be epic. Just sayin'....

At first I thought it was going to jump right into sex with Engo. For shock value mostly. And then go into detail about how they met and how they're messing around and what kind of relationship they have. So it threw me a bit that it was her boyfriend. Not in a bad way, mind you lol. Sounds like she has a pretty perfect life. A charming, handsome, older man that gives her everything she wants and even everything that she doesn't, someone that worships her and obviously keeps her satisfied. Although I can't help but think that maybe they're a little too different for it to ever be fully successful. It's as if he wants someone that's flawless and picture perfect. A trophy that he can cart around on his arm. I've known wealthy guys that swear up and down that they want their gfs to stay in school and make a name for themselves, but turn around and all but demand that their women quit and get married and start a family. And then call them ungrateful because of all the things they've done for them over the years. Sounds like she may be stuck in that kind of trap. Even though right now he's saying all the things he knows she wants to her.

Even their ideas of great sex are vastly different. Hmmmm....

He's very controlling. He's doing it in a subtle way so that she misconstrues it as love and concern.

First little peek at Engo. That man is walking sex.

Mario...you know how much I love Mario. I thought that you wrote him perfectly and I really enjoyed the section with them and the little 'trick' with the stick.

Jayson is going to flip out for sure. Controlling. Just like I said. I couldn't stand being a kept woman. This whole 'I give you everything you want/need, just use my bank card and my credit cards'. How about no, bitch?

Guess I'm meant to be POOR and ALONE for the rest of my life.

Looking forward to more!

May 22nd, 2011 at 03:33pm