Can't Deny It - Comments

  • JAYSON IS A DICKKKKKK
    someone go shove him off a cliff
    freal.
    and KARA AND BENNY SITTIN IN A TREE :D
    plus engo wants her so bad that it makes my tummy hurt
    they need to have a little somethin happen soon!
    more more more :)
    June 7th, 2011 at 06:19pm
  • I love this story! I'm very sorry to hear that you're being accused of plagiarizing. I have yet to read any of your other story's so if you do move to another forum would you be able to tell all of us that love reading your story's? Sarah x
    June 7th, 2011 at 06:10pm
  • Things are about to get steamy! Hot sex is almost always a given if there is that much chemistry...the brain is the most important part of the equation! (isn't science great?)

    So someone has a daddy thing going. He's totally acting like her parent. And even her parent would probably ask her if it would harm her school work and then tell her a strong work ethic is important. At least my parents would. It's good to make your own money/way in the world. She should kick his ass to the curb pronto. Or at her earliest convenience.

    I'm also noticing a Max/Jordon theme here.... ;)

    Anyways, basically she's doomed to have sex with a hot man who doesn't object to a girl with her shit together. We should all have such terrible lives. Just hope it doesn't get her fired!! Can't wait for more.
    June 6th, 2011 at 01:58am
  • I loved the update :) you write Engo perfectly, and i love chloe already!
    June 2nd, 2011 at 07:56am
  • Well he knows about the job now. lol. I love how stubborn she is. Loved the chapter!! Great work!!! More soon, please?
    June 1st, 2011 at 10:20am
  • GAHHH, I feel like every end of your stories are cliffhangers when they're not. I must know what's next, I love this <3
    June 1st, 2011 at 05:52am
  • Love the update..can't wait to see what happens in this story..
    June 1st, 2011 at 05:26am
  • I wouldn't turn Mario down. In fact, it wouldn't matter what he asked me to do. I'd do it. No questions asked. And the dirtier the better ;)

    While Jayson sounds like a catch, he definitely wouldn't be for me. I don't want someone that feels as if the only void he needs to fill in my life is the one in my bed. Women can do that sort of thing by themselves if they have to resort to it. Men like that need to understand that a relationship...a real relationship...is based on so much more than sex. It's about compatibility and meshing together outside of the bedroom as well as in it.

    I like Chloe. I really do. I see so much of myself in here. Except for the fact that I totally suck ass at math. She's got that spunky, witty little personality and she's been forced not only to take care of herself in the big bad world, but her child as well. She seems to really get along well with Amelia despite their differences in age, and I couldn't help but giggle when she made that comment about Max. LOL That's my girl. He's goddamn irresistible and I'd be checking that fine piece of man out every chance I got. Maybe she'll have a shot at him. You never know! Maybe she should just throw caution to the wind and jump him at a bar or something. LOL.

    Amelia with a crush on baby Jordy. Not surprised at all. ;)

    I could seriously just picture that sly little smirk on Engo's face as he knocked on the window and realized that he'd scared the shit out of her. LOL. I laughed, I won't lie. I thought it was funny. It would probably make me piss myself because I'm such a scaredy cat.

    Their sexual chemistry and tension is beyond intense. Love the little cat and mouse game that he's playing. He knows that he has a tremendous effect on her and he's seriously getting off on it. He knows he's got here right where he wants her and that he's unnerving her and weakening her with each passing second. He'd have to be an idiot not to realize it. And no matter how much she tries to act like a tough girl, he's going to see right through it. He might play along with it, but he knows what she's not that strong. And that she won't be able to resist him lol

    Heaven will not be able to help her. Not in a million years.

    Engo got her so worked up that she needed to take her aggression out on the boyfriend. LOL

    Faking the orgasm. She wouldn't need to fake it with Engo. Just sayin'...

    Jayson is a control freak. He needs to calm his tits. For real.

    Definitely looking forward to more!
    June 1st, 2011 at 02:50am
  • Jayson needs to go. I hate him. Go Deryk! lol
    June 1st, 2011 at 01:18am
  • I can't wait to see what happens next!
    June 1st, 2011 at 12:31am
  • I love it, I am so excited for this story, cannot wait for more :) I wonder if Jayson will come around about her job? and will Deryk be able to keep his hands to himself ? mhmmm ;)
    <3
    May 31st, 2011 at 11:06pm
  • I loved it i hope deryk doesnt give up !!
    May 31st, 2011 at 10:09pm
  • OoOooo
    i am really excited to see where this goes next
    i mean, does jayson wanna break up now? orrr are they gonna try and make it work?
    how's he gonna handle her being in a position of power when he goes to suite 66?
    or when engo sees jayson?
    gimme more pleaseeeeeee :) :) :)
    May 31st, 2011 at 09:26pm
  • I love this verse.
    Jayson is such an ass i want to rip his head off... she needs to dump him.
    As for D... love him, can't wait to see what you do next!!
    May 31st, 2011 at 09:16pm
  • People that aren't sexually compatible can't keep up a very good relationship...clearly she didn't have a grandma that told her that. BEST ADVICE EVER!

    Anyway...... I love this! Can't wait for more! :)
    May 27th, 2011 at 01:35am
  • I wish all job interviews were more like that. It was kind of dick move on his part to admit he wasn't going to interview her, but at the same time he did, so who cares, right?

    This guy is a little like you write Eric Staal, temperamental, slightly controlling, rich, hot sex. I imagine he'll go bye bye, though, this girl seems to dream bigger, more free spirited dreams that that guy can give her as a banker, or whatever other boring money type job it is that he has. People that aren't sexually compatible can't keep up a very good relationship...clearly she didn't have a grandma that told her that.

    Can't wait for more!
    May 27th, 2011 at 01:09am
  • Ahhh this is so good:)
    May 26th, 2011 at 02:34am
  • I love this story already!
    May 25th, 2011 at 03:13pm
  • This is amazing! I can't wait for more :)
    May 24th, 2011 at 04:22pm
  • Love it and can't wait for more!
    May 24th, 2011 at 06:32am