Can't Deny It - Comments

Ending is next, already? That makes me sad... I love your stories. Anyhow, sweet beginning with Max and Chloe to a steaming ending with Engo and Amelia! If you have to end it ( ;) ), then maybe something in the future...a few years from now that looks at both couples? :)

The only thing I want is an Engo but I don't think that will be happening. Poop.

Anyway! This just keeps getting and better and I was reading some of your older stories and your writing has gotten a lot better! Not that it was ever bad!

:) -Marianna

Took her long enough to freaking open up! Hahha. Jayson is such a douche though. Seriously, could he be more vile...

Keep on, keeping on.

I honestly thought I commented, I'm getting old! GAH!!

Anyway, Happy New Year! (late :( ) This just keeps getting better and better, do you think you can keep updating it and just just never stop?! Cause that would make my life! :)

Psh, you warned people about the smut. If they can't/didn't choose to read, that's their problem, not yours.

"But Max pouted. "You're right. I've turned into a fucking woman. I need that surgery where they remove your dick."

Yeah...and now my laptop needs that surgery where they help remove all the cold press I just blew all over it reading and laughing about Max. As always, he's my fave character. I adore what a smart ass he is. He's just so French Canadian it hurts and I love it.

I can't wait to see what's about to happen to Jayson, but I really hope it's some serious Home Alone type shit where they just completely terrorize him with crazy schemes. I can see Jordan setting that up.

It would've been best if she had told him about Jayson, but whatever. I just know shit is about to hit the fan.

It's great to see that as far as her home life and her love life go, everything is going perfect for Amelia. She deserves it after everything that she's been through. With Jayson, with denying her growing feelings for Engo, for the drama over the whole 'Chloe/Deryk secret'. She deserves to have this period where things are going wonderfully and there's no stress surrounding school or relationship. And I'm really glad that she feels as if she's part of a family. That she's so comfortable and happy at Chloe's.

Jayson...naturally. Just when things were going so well. I knew he was going to make his douchey return. And I can only begin to imagine what kind of shit he's going to pull at the suite. Someone needs to knock him out. For real.

Max and Fiona are so precious together. Is it too soon to say that he's like a father to her? He's so gentle and sweet and he does whatever he can to make her happy. It was such a lovely little imagine in my head: the two of them sitting on the floor together, chatting about whatever five year olds love to chat about, building this dream lego house for them all to live in. She's such a precious little one and Max is amazing with her. And she obviously adores him. I think she might be ready to have him stay over more. Or all the time. If she talks about them living together like that.

Awww...Max. So unsure of himself. It's nice to see the self conscious side of him poking through. Love is so new to him and it's great to see that he's pissing his pants a little bit at all the things he's feeling and the doubt he's having surrounding whether Chloe feels the same way. I agree with Ame that he should just find a way to talk to her about it. To put his mind at ease. And it was hilarious when she ribbed him about 'justice for all the women in Pittsburgh' and being a drama queen and how Chloe would be mad if she let him cut his dick off.

Max is right. She should talk to Engo.

God....their sex is always so incredible. You write it so wonderfully. They're blazing hot together.

Now the nightmares start. She really needs to be upfront and honest. She was so mad about him not being upfront and honest about Chloe, and she's hiding the Jayson stuff from him!

Looking forward to more!

Happy 2012 Pheebs! Okay, I have to agree with hockey bliss on the point of her needing to tell Deryk about Jayson. I'm afraid Deryk will take it as her not being honest, especially after what they just went through in that area about Deryk & Chloe, DON'T change the sexy parts. Going too far.....are you kidding? You write those parts so well. You know the characters and you write them to perfection! It just wouldn't be the same if you held back. And you don't just write the smut to write it, you make it a real part of the story, so please don't change a thing. I really can't wait to see what happens with Jayson in the suite, I know he's going to cause some kind of chaos that's not going to be good, but I just hope that Amelia not telling Deryk beforehand doesn't backfire on her. Can't wait for your Jordan updates and the Oshie story....even if it's not your usual type of story, I'm sure it will be as awesome as all the rest of them. I can't wait to read it! :)

Also I mean Amelia tell D about Jayson. (In case that isn't clear) sorry.

That is supposed to say "he was unimpressed." Silly autocorrect on my dumb phone. Grr

Ok so that line about Max not just being a woman but also a drama queen - and cutting off his dick - I literally laughed out loud! (And the BF is sleeping beside me so jersey was unimpressed.) But I was impressed by your writing as usual.
I don't think the sex stuff is too far. It's always loving and creative! :-) And HOT.
But I do wish she would tell Deryk. I get that she doesn't want to distract him but I don't want Deryk to take this as Amelia not being honest or not trusting him. Also if Jason could slip on a banana peel and fall from 66 to the ice and accidentally land ass first on Deryk's hockey stick that would be nifty!

I'm so excited to see what happens next. How Deryk finds out and how he handles that piece of shit Jayson. :) Personally I don't think the smut is that much. Only because it's Ameila and Derryk. They like it rough and fast. They like the out of norm stuff, along with the fluff love making. Don't change it! It's what makes them, them. And that's very important to this story. If you change it, I feel like the dynamic of the story & their relationship will change as well.

Awesome job as always, Pheebs. I'm so excited for your next updates and all your other stories too.

UH OH! What's going to happen when Jason sees her?

I loved every bit of that story and I think she should also talk to him about Jayson. I also agree that you should not change a thing about your sexy parts because it really adds to their relationship. Through those parts I understand how deeply they care for and love each other. It is also very entertaining and.... sexy and who doesn't love things that are entertaining and sexy. Can't wait for more!

Dont change a thing about those sexy parts ;) I really hope she opens up to him about her nightmare and talk to him about Jayson and what is bothering her!
Love it and cannot wait for more :)

Awesome update..i cant wait to see how Deryk is going to react knowing jayson is going to be in the suite for the game...

Hope you had a great Christmas and New years!

awesome as usual. cant wait for more! :)

I have a little happy dance when I check my email on my phone when the mibba notification is for this story. I love love love 'Can't Deny It'! I can only imagine the stare down Deryk and Jason have when the team moves pass them to the ice! Thanks for the lovely update!

The sexy scenes are just sexy enough. Can't wait for the Jordan story.

uh-oh, i'm interested to see what happens in Suite 66 when Jayson's firm comes in...i hope she tells Deryk, if she doesn't, it might take them a step backward!