How to Save a Life - Comments

I like it. I'm glad it was a dream. :)

Okay, so a part of me thinks he will leave her, she's with his child, she finds him and tells him, and they get back together. Another part of me is saying he's just going through some double thinking, she'll tell him he's being irrational and he'll snap out of it. Or it could be a combination of both of them.

I liked the dream though, I thought it was really sweet. :)

As for the whole holding updates back, it's okay. All of us writers do it in a sense, and some of us like to make our readers suffer more than others. I'm a cliffhanger writer, and a plot twist writer also, plus I got the idea from one of my favorite authors, so it's all good. I understand where you're coming from. :)

I just hope the wait won't be too long, that's all. :)

~Lady

He isn't really leaving her is he? After all they've gone through..with him fighting for her and all..?
Update soon. :)

Aw. He's not really gonna leave her is he??

Started reading it im on chapter 7 was like "this is pretty interesting ill just finish it up right now!.." notice theirs 37 chapters :0 ill save it for another time xp

I like the update. I was kind of surprised that Matt punched Zane, but it's still good all the same. I like it!

So I started to read this update a few hours ago, but I ended up going out with my family for the evening, and just got back. But, I did like the update.

It seems Matt wants to help, but he'll only push her away more, which is already proven. That's sad, but it's the truth.

I also must say that I got a chuckle out of the whole "fight" sequence. I thought Matt's line was funny, and when I rolled over Zane's foot just put the icing on the cake. I would be like Emily, fighting so hard not to laugh because that would only anger him.

But it was a good laugh. :)

~Lady

that was so beautiful .

I really liked the update, it proves that Zane does care for Emily, which is nice. :)

I honestly don't know where you'll take this story. Part of me thinks it'll be a happy ending, they'll get married and start a family of their own, while another part of me thinks you'll surprise us with a heartbreaking end. With both of them dying in a kind of "Romeo and Juliet" way, or maybe "Hamlet", with Emily drifting down a river on a bed of roses. (So the "Hamlet" one I got out of a book I recently read, where a young female character wanted to do that when she died because she felt she was Ophelia.)

Anyway, regardless of where you're going to take this story, I'm going to be excited. Hell, maybe you'll even mesh the ideas of a happy ending and a tragic one together. :)

That'd be pretty cool, but I like those types of things. :)

~Lady

I like the update. It's great. I like how the insight was given. Keep up the good work. :)

Matt seems to be the skeptical type, or at least he doesn't believe Emily. It was nice though of Zane to care for both of them, so I guess he's not that bad of a kidnapper, he does care. :)

I did like the update, it seemed absolutely romantic with the way Zane was telling Emily everything, the reasons behind them. There will probably be a lot more as the story moves forward to the closing.

But I'm also wondering, and I'm probably right, if Matt will make another appearance. I also wonder if he'll try to convince Emily that she does not love Zane, but him, or something similar, and try to get her to run away with him.

It'll be interesting, and I'm sensing some drama on the horizons.

~Lady

I like the layout

I like the new layout.
I like how Zane took care of Matt. And now things make more sense, to me anyways. It's great. I love it! Update soon.

oooh, there's a twist! hm, i wonder what it could possibly be?!!
oh! loving the new layout! me gusta.

:o What if Matt messes everything up??? D:

It's nice to see the two reunited. I have that stupid phrase stuck in my head now, "Reunited and it feels so good".

At least though now they'll be able to live together without worrying all the time. They won't have to run from place to place, fearing who might be trailing them, that type of thing.

They can have, somewhat, a normal life. :)

I'm interested to hear what Matt has to say on the whole thing too. It'll be interesting. :)

~Lady

Did Zane lie about Matt being dead?

I'm so hooked on this. <3

I thought Matt was dead!! :O
Great update! I love it! Update soon!

MATT c:
I'm so happy now things are falling into place.