July 16th, 2011 at 11:04pm
Andrew needs to see a teacher who's not sympathetic, like my new head of year. xD
Lies never prosper.....'cept most of the time, that is. xD
But gutted Anette's perfect slate getting stained by him.
Bastard.
Anyway, I love it.
There was one part that sounded a little wierd. When Ray was being talked to by that old hag you said "It wasn't her fault" "What makes you say that?" "Well, she didn't. Andrew did." It sounds like you were trying to say she didn't start it, in which Ray's next statement would make more sense. It means the same thing but this just sounds a little off.