False Pretenses - Comments

Thats crazy! What happened to Lyss?? Please Please Please update! You guys are great!

Can't wait to read more, starting to get really good and I'm anxious to see what happens! Keep up the wonderful writing girls! (:

Damn, this is one of the better stories I have been reading on here. I love your writings, and I hope this story isn't coming to an end anytime soon. :)

Yay, an update! :D You always post when I'm beginning to miss this story. You always just... know.



:D
Great job with the update! Aw... so things are still kind of tense, huh? So Jayde's going ahead with the blog... I wonder how Lyss will feel about that?
And Novak, again, being annoying. Psh... really?
I had a gif for that, but, that one wouldn't upload for some reason. XD
Anyway, loved the update! Ooh... and I couldn't help but catch maybe a little foreshadowing? :o
'God, a pregnancy added into this hell would not be good at all.'
And then the little bit before that... when Bam asked Jayde. :o Jayde's not pregnant, but that doesn't mean that Lyss isn't. :o
I'm so wondering about this guess! So you guys better let us know soon! :P
Can't wait for more! :D

I think they should come clean then delete the blog. and I also think lyss is pregnant that would be cool. Anyways great update!

I think Lyss may be pregnant..but that's just a hunch as to why she's been getting sick quite frequently.
& if the girls were to come clean about their blog now, the guys wouldn't be as pissed...I think..

Great christmas present! Thank You!!

Aww... I'm starting to... lean over on the other side now. Like, especially now that Lyss has had the chance to explain herself, and show how she feels.



:( And this fight with Jayde is just making her feel even worse. Aw. :/
Meanwhile, Novak is being a dumbass and trying to expose them, while they're trying to figure things out still. It's like, GTFO. :/



Seriously. He's going to end up ruining things, I can tell. At the rate he's going.
And that won't be good at all. Because, well, for now just Lyss, is trying to figure out how to handle everything without hurting anyone. And if he screws it up, well... it'll ruin everything. And more people will get hurt than intended.
Great update, though. One thing, at the end. In the second to last paragraph:
'"I'm not gonna just sit by and let her call you those names."'
^ I think it should be 'let you call her those names', because as is it sounds like you meant Lyss called Novak names, instead of Novak calling her names, which is what he did. lol. Minor mistake, but it makes a bit of a difference. Just wanted to let you know of it in case you weren't aware. But other than that, you're golden. :)
Can't wait for more! :D

First things first Jayde is being this selfish person becuz she wants to stick to the original plan not caring if she hurts Bam nd the guys all she cares about is her nd Lyss being famous off a stupid blog thts soooo dumb I think tht she should just stick to the plan nd Lyss should just tell Ryan wats goin on nd y her nd Jayde was in West Chester in the first place I just hope tht Ryan forgives her for her actions even though tht has to be the dumbest way in becoming famous: using other famous people tht hurt others just so u can hurt them at the end........thts kind of ironic nd I hate to say it but I'm glad tht Novak is calling them out on their bullshit grant it this guy is very weird nd disgusting but he is a loyal friend regardless on how he acts towards women..........I just hope tht Jayde is doing the right thing in makin her own friend decided between her nd the man tht actually loves her for her becuz thts just wrong nd she should hav a fuckin heart......how the hell can u love someone but yet hurt tht person to be famous grant yes Bam does tht but he doesnt need a blog to hurt his wife well future ex-wife nd besides he is already famous so all he has to do is cheat nd tell other females tht he loves them even tho he doesn't wat Jayde nd Lyss r doin is very hurtful......……love the update can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Aw... that was kind of a sad update. :( With Jayde being all upset with what happened between her and Lyss.
I hope they make amends soon. I hate seeing them fight. And it'd be sad if Lyss chose the guys over their friendship... I mean, I love the guys and all, but Jayde and Lyss have been friends longer than they've known them, and it's just... I still feel bad for saying that. But it'd just be horrible if this all went down wrongly.
They should be close and all, like this:



lol. I saw someone I was following reblog that on tumblr. What are the odds, right? XD
Anyway, yeah, so I guess I'm pro-friendship. I still feel bad for the guys, though, and how this will really break them. Aw... :(
Great update! Can't wait to see what happens next! :D

I'm only up to the 2nd chapter but these chicks sound like bitches. I'm interested to see what happens though.

You guys might wanna go back and check over some grammar? I noticed a few errors and just wanted to let you know incase your story gets reported. :)

I really, really, really wanna know what the font is called that you used for the new banners title. (:

Whoa, you guys are updating like bananas! XD
Loved the three updates, though.
Aw... poor Lyss. She's getting so stressed out about keeping the secret, and thinking about how it will hurt Ryan, that it's literally making her sick. Or well, unless there's an unknown cause that's making her sick. acid_cupcakes knows what I'm talking about.
And wait a minute... Novak's on to them? Novak?



Really? He's figuring out their secret? :/
And aw... Jayde and Lyss kind of had a little argument at the end of the last update. :/ That's not good. They're both probably feeling like this right now, even if they don't admit it:



:( Aww...
They need to make-up! And like, hear each other out. :(
Great job with the updates, guys! Oh, and beautiful new layout, I love it!! :D
Can't wait for more! :D

...I have a feeling thaat Lyss is pregnant..is she? is she?!? :D
And if she is, they need to put a stop to this non-since about hurting the guys and getting famous that way. But if she isn't they still needa do that..haha
And Jayde needs to take care of Novack, before he finds everything out..

O_O IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT IS SHE PREGNANT?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!? cause thats what i think c:

Awww.... :')
Lyss and Ryan's relationship reminds me of this:



It's just so cute!! :) And I love them together so much.
Hm... and this is a kind of big step they're taking. With Lyss meeting his parents and all. It's getting pretty serious.
Aw, and then what all Bam said to Jayde. About her changing him and all. :') And him falling for her for real, for real. :'( And then he asked her if she would leave him... and she said no. This is just going to break his heart even more by the end of the summer.
And both of these girls are feeling guilty. Too bad they ever made the plan... I'm sure if they knew what exactly was going to happen, they wouldn't have ever did it. They're just both feeling like this right now:



Great updates, you two! Sorry for the delay in commenting. I was sick all weekend. :/
But can't wait for more! :D

I, like everyone else it seems, kinda want the girls to tell the guys about their website and stop with it or blog about being their girlfriends, and not how they're going to use them to get famous. And hopefully the guys will just look past what they were planning to do..

:D aww they sotra kinda said the words :3

They need to tell the guys the truth i mean for Pete's sake they told their guy tht they love them nd they meant it too so either they get rid of tht blogging website nd get famous by being their girlfriend or they tell them the truth nd hav Ryan and Ban be mad at them forever nd never forgiving them again soo yea they need to talk like now nd think about wat they r doing again becuz it isnt fair tht they actual found someone tht they love but yet sabotage them through the Internet just soo tht they can be famous tht is ridiculous sooo I'm hopin tht they tell them.......love the update tho can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

uhhhhoohhh :(( I hope they come clean to the guys and they forgive them. </3