Desperate Desires & Unadmirable Plans. - Comments

  • whilethefirewasout

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    Ugh, they're definitely gonna fall in love with each other but they're never gonna tell the other. Austin is gonna be Mr. Right for Layla! I KNOW IT ALREADY DON'T YOU DARE TRY TO DENY IT.
    July 27th, 2011 at 12:19am
  • MYP

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    I loved this chapter so much man!!! Holy shit it was good. Austin and Layla's whole conversation was so intense and kind of sad. I loved it! And I cannot wait for more, and to see how their relationship plays out. I love Layla! This story is just crazy good!!!!
    Update again soon please!!!
    July 27th, 2011 at 12:17am
  • tmdaisy22

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    That was a sad little section, but in the setting of this story (and possibly in real life,) I could see that trait in him:S Great chapter, looking forward to more!
    July 26th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • psuche

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    Lovely :)) 
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • erika_xtc

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    Aw, I kinda wish that Austin would change for her and not break her heart.
    July 25th, 2011 at 05:47pm
  • DanielleOhhhh

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    oh my God I love these two. I love their attitude both alone and the one they tend to have when they're together. I cant wait to read more.
    July 25th, 2011 at 04:03pm
  • sukisumi4ever

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    And here we go again. I'm sorry if you both know the other person is not going to be good for them why go or it? So frustrating :( this was so intense, buy the semi cruel honesty is crucial so they both know where they tandem. Unfortunately I don't think either is going to stik to it :(
    July 25th, 2011 at 02:02pm
  • carcrashhearts.

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    I loveee this. It's so different. Not all lovey and gooey and shit. Ahaha.
    But I do think they should fall in love in the end. (;
    Only because I hate sad endings, though. Someone will get their heart broken and it'll just suck. Aha. Or they'll just decide it's over between them and move on with their lives all fine and dandy, and I'll just be here like wtf? D:.

    So, yeah..
    xD
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:45am
  • SpinningInCircles

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    Oh please they're so gonna fall in love, ahahah.
    This is great!
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:18am
  • State Of Grace

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    ahhhh! i cannot wait to see if austin is hmm perhaps mr right for layla! ahhhh its gonna be so good!
    July 25th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • hachie

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    I think Layla would fall hard for Austin despite her saying that she won't and then she would have her heart broken since Austin has never really loved her girl.
    She is right about he both of them, she is always falling for the wrong guy and he is too afraid to commit himself to one girl.
    I like how easy they can talk to each other after their romp at the club!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 25th, 2011 at 03:59am
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    One of them is SO going to fall in love
    July 25th, 2011 at 03:04am
  • raja sahara

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    I spy Mr. John O'Callaghan :)
    Update soooon!
    July 25th, 2011 at 01:31am
  • lovelyhope

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    Layla is going to fall for him hard. She should just stay away. I think Austin will realize that he wants to try a relationship with Layla but it will be too late.
    July 25th, 2011 at 01:22am
  • Cantstandemmie

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    <333 amazing.
    cat wait to see where their relationship goes.
    July 25th, 2011 at 01:11am
  • Cantstandemmie

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    Theres not a lot Austin Gibbs stories,
    But this one is REALLY good.
    I hope you update faster.
    I'm glad I found it,
    <3
    July 23rd, 2011 at 08:39pm
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    YOU MADE AN AUSTIN GIBBS STORY!!
    Ahh this is awesome!!
    I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon!!!!
    July 23rd, 2011 at 01:47am
  • tmdaisy22

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    Can I just say that I could totally see Austin doing that, lol;) It was a great chapter though, and I am looking forward to more:)
    July 22nd, 2011 at 02:51am
  • sukisumi4ever

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    ick. i like her better when she refused to sleep with him. as much as i love his music hia charaxtwr seems like major douchebag material. run girl, as fast as you can.
    July 21st, 2011 at 02:03pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    And they've slept together! I'm really believing my previous prediction! Austin was trying so hard to get her ass hahahaha. He must actually like her in a sense! Obviously enough to pester her about just her name! and hahahahahaha about Layla leaving him with blue balls! But then again I feel like as of right now, they only want each other for sex. I like!
    July 21st, 2011 at 09:39am