Desperate Desires & Unadmirable Plans. - Comments

ahhhhhhh! love the second chapter cant sait to find out what happens next!!!

Oh my god, I fucking love it!!! I love Layla's attitude and how she acts towards Austin. And of course I love Austin hahahaha. But really, I love how you're writing this!!! It's so good man, I'm dying for more!! Especially with just how they interact and then them getting it on outside the club. Love it! Hahaha. I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
Update again soon please!!!

That end part sorta reminded me of the movie Serendipity for some reason...

Layla's going to fall in love with Austin. As much as she doesn't want to, she's going to.

Soooo good <3

To think that Sexy Gibbs would do something like that!.....too hot!
Geez! He's so damn cute:)

they had sex against a wall outside the club oh my god you want me so dead.
Austin is such a sexy guy for me. I wouldnt think it twice to...you know?
Lyla's attitude is cool tho. I can't wait to see what direction you thought for this story.
Loveee this.

So they run into each other again and this time she gave him her name!
And it has been a month since the encounter between Austin and Layla, I wonder if he has been thinking about her the whole time.
I bet he was very happy that he was able to run into her again and this they had sex outside the club!
I am thinking that Austin is going to be the one that will change and ultimately making her fall.
I look forward to the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She got him gooooddd! XD I love this!

this story is so much better than expected :3
<3

Aw, I still like this. Layla is still my favorite. What a cool bitch ;)
UPDATE SOON!

Ohh I like this! I think that they're just gonna end up sleeping together over time then just keep on doing the nasty till one falls for the other. Like accidentally run into each other at other parties.

This story sounds like it's going to be amazing. I like how strong and sassy Layla is. She's not going to fall for Austin's b.s. as easily as other girls.

I LOVE BRAND NEW LIKE NOBODIES FUCKING BUSINESS AND I LOVE YOU FOR BASING THE STORY ON THAT SONG.
Ugh, it's so fucking good already!!! Oh man, I know I'm going to love everything about this story, because I already love both Layla and Austin! Well, I already loved Austin.....hahahaha.
The beginning to this story is just too amazing, and I cannot wait for more!!!
Update again soon please!!!

omg so good. loveeee austin gibbs and can't wait to read more of this story!

Ok I already love this :)
They are teasing each other. I like that. And I love Austin no matter what.
Oh and I love you of course.
Cant wait for more!

this story sounds like its gonna be so good
i already love layla xP
<3

OMG she totally fell for her trap!
I really thought she was going to go through with sleeping with him but then she mentioned about brining her friend and from that I knew she was going to bail on him.
At least she was able to bruise his ego when she stood him up!
I can tell I will most definitely enjoy this so much because Layla is one badass girl!
I look forward to the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is already amazing <3

Oh my goodness...I am already in love with Gibbs' character:) Sooo looking forward to more!