Send Me Away With the Words of a Love Song - Comments

It's rain rice!! Lol Im glad they worked it out

Oh hell no, update please I've been reading this for two days and you leave it with that kind of a cliff hanger??? Ahhhh I seriously want to scream oh please don't let him be cheating I like them togather and their so cute..

Jimmy is such an ass and I don't like Raury she's a shitty friend.

You know, I didnt like this story at first. I was going to stop reading it. But I gave it a chance and I'm glad I did because I love it! I usually don't even comment on stories because I'm always mobile and oh so lazy, but I love it so much <3

Oh my god I want to know what happens so badly!!

ooh brian is in trouble.. cant wait for next update !!

OH Brian in trouble..jimmy better be fucking sorry

*Gasp!* Jimmy! You terrible, terrible monster, you! That was a horrendous thing of him to do to Raury. And she seems like such a sweet and caring girl, despite being tough. Aww, :( I hope Raury gets what she wants.

Anyway, this is my comment on somebody's story, so I didn't quite know what to say. Well, except keep it up and I can't wait for the next update. :)

Bad Jimmy! >:(

loved it.

loved it.

I can't believe what a dick Jimmy was...he could have been nicer about it. She should get herself a boyfriend thats gonna treat her right

Wow, to say this story is very interesting is the total truth, can't wait for a new update.

Update!

So, I just started reading this. Let me start off by saying its great! And I read the whole thing last night: let's say that I was pretty much sobbing when everyone was falling her a slut. Girls+sad fanfic+lack of sleep don't to well together. But other than that, it's good. And I'm hoping that the person in her house is just Matt having a fit over something completely irrelevant .

Loved it

Brian such a horn dog...she should've seen that coming

Ah! I don't usually like fanfiction with OCS. AT ALL. But your writing style is so perfect! Wow, it really draws you in-and I don't know, there's just something about it that I really like. <3

AAAaAHHHHH!!!WRITE MORE!!!I reallyy hope brian isnt playing her!

Very rarely do i come across a summary that drew me in right away. Usually, there just basic introductions. But yours showed the emotions of the character that drew me in instantly! Everything about this story is truly and simply amazing! From the layout to the style of writing..pure perfection! I simply can't wait to read more! Please update soon!!

Great summary! It really drew me in. Also, you are a terrific writer. Like, truly. Your style is quite captivating and the first chapter was very interesting. I can't get over how fantastic your writing is. It's just...wow, I'm speechless. It's astounding! :) Good luck in upcoming chapters! :)

Your summary was great. I liked how you played with the raw emotions of the main character to draw someone in. All that was missing was maybe more of an introduction.

Other than that I really like your intake of this type of adoption seeing as I have read a lot of Avenged Sevenfold adoptions before.

A plus is the layout is nice and easy to understand and I like that and so will a lot of other readers. You should be proud of what you have produced.