Send Me Away With the Words of a Love Song - Comments

Awe they kissed! That was a cute birthday present from Brian, ya know she's only been waiting for it since forever! lol nice update

Awww! Now isn't that just cute!

I like how this starts off with Senoma being adopted. That's definitely something different than from most fanfics and it gives a little background info on her as a character.
You have a simple writing style that works really well with this story and I really like it. You flowed the years of her growing up together perfectly.
Raury makes me laugh yet shove her in a closet at the same time. Haha. She's an interesting character.
The corn maze scene was cuteish, simply for the fact that Johnny was so awkward and nervous. And I have to say, I face-palmed when Senoma said 'So, should we just do it?'. AWKWARD! XD
Anyway, this story has a cute start and like I said, it's very different from most fanfics, which is a good thing. I really like it and I look forward to seeing where this goes!

I like this. It's cute how shy Johnny was and I just wanna punch Zack for being so mean

lol aww little johnny!

Ok, so I think that this is awesome - great job doll! Thanks for telling me about it, can't wait for more!

tahaaaaa, Johnnyyyy <3
Okay, let me explain; at this very moment I'm in love with every story that involves Johnny, like - a little more than him just being there.

Anyways, I'm glad you made it a full story and it was funny because I've had If I Die Young stuck on my mind the entire day!

I loves it! her friend is a jerk though!

I'm not a huge fanfic fan at all, but this is definitely interesting. I like how this starts off with Senoma being adopted; whatever little amount of fanfics that I do read start off so...cliche-ish that it's not an enjoyable read. However, like I said, this is interesting. I can relate to Senoma a bit, seeing as I was born here, but moved to Israel when I was two; when I came back, I didn't know a lick of English >.< Anyways, you've got a nice little story going on here. Your descriptions are nice and you have a simple writing style that I like. It's not my usual cup of tea, but enjoyable nonetheless. I wish you the best of luck with this story! <3

YAY! your actually making it a story! I'm so excited!