Send Me Away With the Words of a Love Song - Comments

aww that was dead sweet of what brian did. love how they didnt go out and spent money on each other, they thought of a different way. cant wait for next update!

Just refound this and i love it though the one shot for it made me cry

I love this story!

I really enjoyed the premise of this story, and I felt that, in comparison to the other adoption stories that I've come across on the site, I feel like this one is the most realistic. I also admire how you incorporated the Ukraine instead of just setting this in the typical UK, US, Austrailia, etc, but on the other side of that, I did feel like some moments felt too much like info dump about the region.

As far as concrit goes, I did notice some grammatical errors, and as I mentioned on another one of your stories that I commented on, there really isn't enough description of the characters for someone who isn't familiar with the fandom to become immersed in the story.

First off, I want to thank you for having such good grammar. It's rare to find someone who knows what a comma is, let alone how to use one.

That being said, this story is amazing... It's sad that she was abandoned by her parents at the orphanage, though 8( I haven't gotten a chance to read the rest, but I'm definitely going to now o_o

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND UPDATE O_O

This is adorable, and very well written! Fantastic job :)

The one critique I have that is really... minor and more of a personal thought than anything is the fact that the beginning has Senoma speaking from a child's point of view, wheras her vocabulary seems quite large and her thoughts unexpectedly coherent, haha. You made up for a lot of that with the questions she had and the scary thought of her not being able to go America because she couldn't speak English well enough, but some of the time I was wondering why she knew how to think so well... haha. Maybe it's just me.

But honestly, excellent work, it's wonderful :)

Okay so it took me awhile to read this ENTIRE story but I am SO glad that I did!! It's so amazing and I couldn't stop reading it all. I mean seriously, my laundry and housework went undone because I sat here glued to the computer reading this. You wanted me to give you constructive crit on this but honestly I can't find any to give. Everything was amazing and you are a really great writer. I hope you keep writing this because if not, I'll be pretty crushed.

this is amazing :) one of the best ive ever read.

Nice I like this story.
Very well written! You should keep it up and feel proud
with what all you've written so far. =)

I love this so far
I really hate her brother. I can't someone who is your family would do that. Thats just fucked right there. I don't see how her parents havn't found out about the kids at school

found this story thanks to angelina shadows :)
just read all chapters and i totally love it :D
brian is such a cutie!!
little matt, whatta hell is his problem?? :O
i'd have zacky kick his ass ;) heheh
and jimmy.. hmm..

I really like the idea of this story, especially since it is definitely something fresh and new. I like your writing style; like Alexander Bernadotte said, you have such a simplistic way of writing that I personally like :) You definitely have a fan in me when it comes to this story! Keep up the good work :)

*subscribed*

Oop, I can not fathom the immensity of excitement I got when I read this story! It is so well written and I love the plot.

Definitely subscribed.

I absolutely adore this story.
:]

Yay! You mentioned me! Thanks mother!

KEEP!!! definitely

I don't wanna cry
I don't wanna cry
I don't wanna cry
I don't wanna cry
I don't wanna cry
but I kinda have to cry 'cause I already know how this ends):
and it's making me cry.
BUT, at least Brian's still here.
with Senoma.
for now.
hehehoho.

I don't know how you don't have hundreds of comments but this was really beautiful and I just.... fucking loved it.

I love me some syn (; I really liked how you devoted the first chapters to explain about Senoma's background and how her adoption happened and how she felt about it. I was mildly disappointed that you didn't include the part where Brian fed her cookies, the one that wasn't in the chapters but it was in the one-shot. I also hope that there's an alternate ending somewhere because I just don't want to start bawling and have my mother think that I'm a fucking psycho because I've been crying from looking at my laptop. It'll make her suspicious XD

I did love the ending, I just, it was wonderful and it was very rare that I saw any grammar or spelling mistakes! Props for that! I love your vocabulary and I do like how you take the time in the story to make sure things like Zina's baby and wedding happening, because they would be very important for Senoma. I also really like the name Senoma. It's quite beautiful. You're also good at emotion portrayal and I would like to see more of it in the chapters.

I love how Matt came in and she was having a dirty dream about Brian
I just found that hilarious, and Senoma is just so funny. I really like how you made her and Raury compliment each other as they were supposed to in the story, they match each other beautifully. I'm kind of curious as to where Jimmy and Raury are going, all though I will admit that I kind of want to slap Jimmy for not committing to Raury. it's rude -_-.

I agree with Ms.CorrCorr, Brian can touch himself. As well as what Brian said, they just can't do sex not including things leading up to that (;

I Love The Story Keep It Going I'm Subscribed.

I think Brian will be okay with no sex for a while, I'm sure he'll be just fine touching himself