I Will Wait - Comments

Aw, I'll make sure to revisit and comment swap you when this is done being edited :]

HEY
IT'S BACK
I'M EXCITED
VERY
VERY
V E R Y
EXCITED

This story's cute! I really like your style of writing- it's kind of like a real person would think and sometimes there are like run ons and it strays from the original point but I like that sort of style.

Your descriptions are good, and you can tell that you develop the characters a lot. Dolly has obviously been changing and it's good to see her sort of breaking out of her shell and becoming more confident as the chapters go on. And her and Freddie are ca-ute.

Bethany is a bit stereotypical bitch character but I mean, that's okay. There are some parts that are predictable but all in all, it's a good, entertaining story

In the first 5 chapters, Dolly is really dumb and it's annoying, but I actually ADORE this story. I love the confidence she has every time Beth tries to get her to break things off. Dolly and Freddie are really cute.

I just love getting new updates from this story! I really don't like Beth at all, but I love how you write her. So stoked Dolly and Freddie are together! [:

dsfbgeajbyoler an update !!! C: ugh dolly and freddie are just like, bundles of adorableness and reading about them seriously makes my day.

“We’re real.”

“What?”

“I’m real,” he says, squeezing my hand. “And you’re real.” He shrugs. “So we’re real.”

“We’re real.”

I LOVE THAT. ;___________________;

I feel like I'm watching a small child grow, I mean the story's changed and grown so much, just :')

please, please update soon. I really love this story.

SO WEIRD.
Just how you've changed the story. I mean, it feels like you haven't changed much- but you really have. I like the main girl, Dolly, a little bit more. She's not as nerdy as the former version [well a little bit, but it's not mentioned as much as before, I think? haha], but she's willing to go out and take action, and I'm just so glad.
I do not have the guts for any of that.

I'm also getting used to the name Dolly. To be honest, I was really really hesitant about reading your new version all because you changed her name and I've never liked the name. But I love your writing too much and now I'm used to her name [working on liking it, haha] and just ugh.

Seriously praying things that fall together swell for them. They're just too cute! And all because you are a fantastic story creator, it's just so lovely. I can't wait to see how their relationship buds and and and how everything works out for the them and I'm just really excited because you never finished Save Your Scissors [well in a way you practically did but not really...], and I'm just really excited for how this goes!! Keep up the incredible work :D

another amazing chapter! Is it possible to fall in love with a story?

Love love love this chapter! It's so cute and shy and just, love it!

Okay so I was a silent reader of Save Your Scissors ( sorry, huhu ;___; ), and the changes that you've made to this story have been completely awesome so far c: I love how her name is Dolly now, because it suits her completely and I love how you've made her even more awkward - I don't remember her being as awkward as this in Save Your Scissors - because you've made Freddie a little more... I don't know, confident and stuff. They balance each other out in this rewrite more than the past story because well, they contrast each other more drastically and I love it c: I loooove how he's totally pursuing her and she doesn't believe that he is, because it's just in her nature to just be like, why me? Gah I just love Dolly and Freddie, they're such adorable character and whenever I read about them my feelings just go kdhfglkehlktr, y'know? D:

The only thing I'd say is that Beth is the stereotypical bitch that always pops up in stories. Her actions are just... extremely predictable. But, from what I remember, I think she has potential to become a more 3D character. After all, it's only been five chapters so, c:

Oh and I just feel the need to tell you that this is honestly one of my favourite mibba stories ever ;____; and whenever I get an email telling me that you've updated, I squeal on the inside (omg yay more cute Dolly and Freddie). c:

When I read this story, my face heats up and it feels exactly like its happening to me. You make it really easy to not just identify with the characters but to step into their shoes, even if it's just for a few moments. Very well done, I can't wait for the next update.
P.S. I really love the rhythm of your sentences.

weiwdrhjsdfhljksdfhkl OK, WTF. COOL.

The beginning was literally perf. I really want a romance like these two. I love how awkward Dolly is, but at the same time she's super realistic about life. What's up with Bryon being all up in her junk? Who is this Bryon kid? He ratchet, and we barely even know who he is! I honestly kind of expected the ending.. but I can't believe it actually happened. a;sdklgja;sdklgj;asldjg WHY. OK. COOL.

Update soon, love! (:

I really enjoy reading this story! The change from the old one to this one works. I love Dolly and I think her awkwardness isn't strained but seems natural.

I only have time to read the first chapter at the moment, but I'm enjoying it so far. Judging only by the first chapter, these seem like journal entries almost from each of the characters. I like that even through the way they speak, you can see their different personalities.

I like the way you write. Your expression of each character's emotions through their thoughts and interactions with each other is still effective; you don't really need much detail to intrigue the reader.

I know I'll eventually have a favorite as I keep reading, but I haven't decided who my favorite is yet.

Melting. Literally, melting.

I love how awkward Dolly is, I mean, before she was awkward, but now she's like reeaaalllyy awkward and I really like her name suits her personality. I love how Izzie is still the same bubbly person, and how her and Parker are madly in love but I especially love Freddie. He's still the cute, adorkable kid from the original.

adsgkl;jasdl;g GAH, THIS IS JUST SO GREAT, I LOVE IT. Thank you, thank you, thank YOU for updating. I know that my messages aren't very meaningful, but I'll try to make them more meaningful as the story progresses. (:

Update soon, love! (:

I love this :3 I love Dolly and I love Freddie.
And I love this. So, yeah. Lots of love, and stuff.

asfkl;gnaskl;dgj; YES, AN UPDATE.

Dolly is just as shy before.. But I feel like she's a lot different at the same time. Freddie was being all cute and it was just ;alkdgj;ajsdgl and made me want to cry from all the nostalgia. I can't wait until they start hanging out and stuff. I'm actually really, really, interested in seeing how you put in Beth and then the evil Frost.

Meeeeep, update soon, love! (:

BEE OH MY GOSH
THAT WAS SO PERF UGH I LOVE IT
I love how the chapter's written in everyone's perspective c:
THIS IS AMAZING THOUGH.
I can already sense heartbreak written all over this.
/fangirling
PLEASE UPDATE SOON<3