When We Collide - Comments

I'm glad Mikey was the one that died, I really want Frank and Gerard to be happy together though ;_;

I'm actually kind happy Frank dumped Gerard.

Mikey is dead. Ray has disappeared. Frank broke Gerard's heart. Bob just wants to help Gerard even if Gerard doesn't want the help. Frank has the support of his parents again and now Gerard has no one, because it seems he is turning away from Bob and Mikey is dead and before that he was a complete train wreck, so no support there. Also it seems that if the guys from the Bloc are more sided with Frank than Gerard, atleast that's what it seems to me. Sad he died with the knowledge of what happened that night years ago with his and Gerard's mom, guess we'll never know. I have a feeling Gerard is going to try to kill himself soon, because again Frank broke his heart and cast him aside because he said he wasn't worth it; words similar to what Gerard said to Mikey when he was in the hospital and Mikey went into his downward spiral. Connection maybe?
I'm glad my comments make you smile. Glad you got to meet the band. Hope you do well in school with finals and everything. Hope you are well and continue to be well; I'm doing fine.

Well, I can't say Gerard didn't deserve that. He annoyed me enough when he sent Frank to answer the door to Ray for him and when he tried to leave him in the garden. Rabidly waiting for more.

this chapter is.... wow
great writing
so sad though
just...
wow

Oh my... I haven't commented for a while but..wow
Poor Frank though, I feel worst for him, he just got caught in a crossfire.
I can't wait to learn who actually lived and who died,or actually maybe I'd be better off not.knowing BECAUSE HOLY MOLY 'DEM FEELS
btw I'm not paying attention in class right now because I.just had to read and comment on this blood curdling story.

My heart hurts... For all of them :'(

You have awesome writing skills :D

I have NEVER cried so much reading a chapter before! The only time my hand moved away from my mouth in shock was to move the page down slightly. I have a genuine pain in my chest right now. You dear lady have a genuine talent for writing to cause me so much distressed. I swear on all that I love if Frank doesn't make it through this, if he isn't rushed to hospital and miraculously saved I may cry in a corner. You have 6 chapters to make me happy! SIX!

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Why would you.

Did Frank die? More importantly did he die after the realization that Gerard chose Mikey over him? Really graphic description of what Ray did to Mikey, it made me squirm. Did Ray shoot Gerard in the leg instead of the chest because Gerard was ready to die for the ones he loves, reminding Ray of people from the gangs of his childhood like in chapt. 37? Gerard just gave up in the end because everything he cared about is now gone, I thought he was going to get revenge. I really hope some how Frank survives.
Hope you are well and that you get to meet the band.

ok so if frank didn't die in the previous chapter, he sure as hell died in this one! poor guy, even in the end he realized that gerard would pick mikey over him :(

and mikey, sad and sorry to say (not really lol) that he got what was coming to him. very disgusting descriptions of how ray got at him, but i loved them.

gerard? you're just gonna give up? probably not the best idea, dude.

lol i know, i'm a hypocrite, but he's so adorable! that's why it's easy to do all the shit we do to him. i hope you get to meet him though! just try not to think of any fanfics when you do :p

more soon!

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...excuse me for a few days while I DIE

God why can't I stop crying

Okay I just read through this chapter again and I'm fucking crying, it hit me so hard. So yeah, thanks for killing my feelings :(

You... killed Frank. Frank. Sweet, nice, cute little Frankie.
He's the only one NOT involved in bad things and he died.
I don't ever think I've cried at a fan fiction before.

Umm. What.

I'm sorry, but did you just fucking kill off frank? seriously? what the fuck did he do to deserve that? lol i shouldn't be talking though...

but geez whyyyyyyyyyyyy? I just can't right now I'm sorry

more soon please, I'm hoping that it's just a bad dream

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Okay I feel bad for missing a chapter but wow, Mikey has completely gone. And this chapter... (warning)

WHAT THE HELL WHYYY FRANKIE IS INNOCENT!! WELL. KINDA. HE HAD NO BUSINESS OR ANY CRAP WITH RAY! OH MY GOD I WAS LIKE :O ALL THE WAY THROUGH THAT. I SWEAR TO GOD IF HE DIES I'LL HUNT YOU DOWN! OH JEEZ I HAVE SO MUCH TO SAY BUT I CAN'T WORD IT! SOOOO MUCH SUSPENSE! DAMN, SHIT REALLY IS GOING DOWN NOW. UGH. I HAVE A LITTLE SYMPATHY FOR MIKEY BUT NOW I'M HATING HIM AGAIN. IT'S HIS BUSINESS WITH RAY AND NOBODY ELSE'S, SO ONLY HE SHOULD BE INVOLVED! DAMN IT! WAITING UNTIL NEXT MONDAY IS GONNA BE HELL! :'((((

(I'm sorry for all the caps!)

Frank. I thought you weren't going to kill Frank, but then again you technically haven't, he could just be unconscious and the second shot could have been directed at someone else, maybe Mikey. I hope Gerard doesn't lose Frank. I wondering what the hell is up with Mikey like He wants to die that's why he reveals himself but after Frank is shot he backs away scared, make up your mind up. Hope you are well.

FRANK CANNOT DIE :O :( :(