Awe(: I love this story! Please upload the next chapter soon? I was kinda shocked when Selena wouldn't give James a chance! I want them to stay together for a long time! Anyways I'm loving the plot and the unexpected twist and turns your giving the story! Keep it up(:
OMG!!! FIN-A-FREAKING-LY!!!!!! I'm so happy they're finally together. I really hooope they stay together. She can move to NY he can break up with those kinda gf's and they can live together living their dreams! POST MOSREEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I love this so much!! It flows wonderfully, it's extremely well written and I'm stoked to see what happens next 'cause personally I hope James and Selena get back together!! :D
Can't wait for the next chapter! I really liked that one, I don't know if it was the action or the cuteness levels, but it all fit really well together. :) Please update soon. ^_^
Merry Christmas!!!!!!!!!! I always love the new chapters yu post. Hope yu post another before new years, but if not soon after :D happy new years if anything :)
I just read the whole story so far. This... Is... AMAZING!!!!!! I am so utterly in love with this story now!!!! I love how Greg and Amber are together, it's super cute!! And James and Selena... Gosh... They have a lot of issue... And what about the kiss? Is Selena confused now? I hope she realizes that she loves James still... I am looking forward to your next update :)
Just try and proof-read it first. You missed some capitalization and some punctuation marks. Like, From Chapter 13: I smile politely at Margret. She was great friends with my mom, so I knew she was kept up to date with my activities "I’m currently a lawyer down in Miami.” And a whole lot more. So make sure you proof-read your chapters first and try to avoid mistakes like that.