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  • PreciousFeather

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    I just wanted to say that your story is really good! I could not emphasize it enough and Im soooo looking forward to the next chapter XD!
    January 9th, 2012 at 03:33am
  • Painted Smiles

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    WHAT DOES THE TIME CAPSULE HAVE!?

    Gurl, you need to continue this story ASAP! CAUSE I AIN'T WAITIN' NO MORE! I'm kidding, I'm in love with this and you better write more <3
    January 7th, 2012 at 06:46am
  • The Colour of Music

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    Finally!
    Selena needs to realise that people change and that it is obvious that James has.
    Please update soon. :)
    January 7th, 2012 at 02:13am
  • Jada_Kins

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    Selena Should Give James A Chance . Update Soon , Please .
    January 6th, 2012 at 07:27am
  • askingsamy

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    Awe(: I love this story! Please upload the next chapter soon? I was kinda shocked when Selena wouldn't give James a chance! I want them to stay together for a long time! Anyways I'm loving the plot and the unexpected twist and turns your giving the story! Keep it up(:
    January 4th, 2012 at 11:18pm
  • horserideraja

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    ohymgosh. something needs to happen for them >.< they cant not end up together. that would be just cruel
    January 4th, 2012 at 12:09pm
  • TearsOfTheHeart7

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    OMG!!! FIN-A-FREAKING-LY!!!!!! I'm so happy they're finally together. I really hooope they stay together. She can move to NY he can break up with those kinda gf's and they can live together living their dreams! POST MOSREEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    January 4th, 2012 at 11:43am
  • xorachsauce

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    I love this so much!! It flows wonderfully, it's extremely well written and I'm stoked to see what happens next 'cause personally I hope James and Selena get back together!! :D
    January 1st, 2012 at 09:21am
  • The Colour of Music

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    Can't wait for the next chapter! I really liked that one, I don't know if it was the action or the cuteness levels, but it all fit really well together. :)
    Please update soon.
    ^_^
    December 28th, 2011 at 11:47pm
  • TearsOfTheHeart7

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    Merry Christmas!!!!!!!!!! I always love the new chapters yu post. Hope yu post another before new years, but if not soon after :D happy new years if anything :)
    December 25th, 2011 at 12:13pm
  • hannahlovex3

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    The story has potential, but some of the spelling errors are a bit tedious. Proof read, proof, read, proof read.
    December 17th, 2011 at 02:38am
  • ItWasAlwaysBri

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    I just read the whole story so far. This... Is... AMAZING!!!!!! I am so utterly in love with this story now!!!! I love how Greg and Amber are together, it's super cute!! And James and Selena... Gosh... They have a lot of issue... And what about the kiss? Is Selena confused now? I hope she realizes that she loves James still... I am looking forward to your next update :)
    December 17th, 2011 at 12:37am
  • hiwagang hapis

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    The story is great.

    Just try and proof-read it first. You missed some capitalization and some punctuation marks.
    Like,
    From Chapter 13: I smile politely at Margret. She was great friends with my mom, so I knew she was kept up to date with my activities "I’m currently a lawyer down in Miami.”
    And a whole lot more.
    So make sure you proof-read your chapters first and try to avoid mistakes like that.
    December 8th, 2011 at 11:26am
  • The Colour of Music

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    'bout freaking time. :3
    Yayyyyyyyyyyy!!!!
    They finally kissed and made up.
    So freaking happy. :D :D :D
    ^_^
    December 5th, 2011 at 06:28am
  • akanevampire19

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    She kissed him! =D But I hope Riley is okay... =/
    December 5th, 2011 at 03:56am
  • callmedreamer

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    Yay finally!!!!!!!
    December 5th, 2011 at 03:08am
  • TearsOfTheHeart7

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    woohooo!!!!!!
    I'm so happy she kissed him! She gave in to what she's been wanting!
    Can't wait to see what happens soon!
    December 5th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • horserideraja

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    awwwwww <3 that was adorable.
    December 5th, 2011 at 01:56am
  • shellieann

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    I love this stoy. I would think about publishing this story. Please, udate soon.
    December 1st, 2011 at 03:02pm
  • The Colour of Music

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    Amber and Greg are soooo fricking adorable!!!
    I'm loving it. :3
    Also, I am glad that James and Selena are starting to get thier act together. :P
    November 29th, 2011 at 07:58am