The Time Capsule - Comments

Finally the next chapter!
that was amazing. But it just brought up more questions then answers. Lol.
Can't wait for the next one.
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This is a great story and its nice to find one where the writer is using proper english and grammer. I stop reading alot of stories after the first paragraphs because its too hard to get past bad grammer, Yours is much better and I like your plot and story line!!!

Awwww .... :)
Greg and Amber are cute.
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I am loving this story!
Keep it coming.
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This is great! you are a natural at character development and plot progression. i love how you express the relationships between characters.

my only suggestion would be to let the subtleties of those relationships come out naturally rather than force them out like you seem to have been. let the characters interactions speak for them rather than telling us exactly what they are thinking. ive hears this described as 'show' dont 'tell' and i think its a great moto.

This is an amazing story.
The plot is original and you have real writing talent.
I can't wait to read more, so please update soon!
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I'm loving this story! I have this romanticized idea of time capsules and how they can bring back the greatest memories of the past, seeing as our brain has a away of remembering everything that's bad and only a few good memories... maybe that's just me. Anyway, I really like how this is coming out so far, so I'm subscribing and I hope to read more soon :)