Your the writer you write how you like. Remember that it's your writing that will get you known one day. I liked it the way it was and I liked it this way too. Please update soon. I am now left wondering what happened between those two. Ahhhhhhh. Can't wait. Good job though. No hating here.
This chapter was okay. Somethig was missing I don't know what it was. But I like it though cuz you introduced the fact Ethan thought she was amazing and her while snowboardig thing. Can't wait for more. :)
I'm an idiot and forgot to sub before but I did it now! So go me! Anyway I love this and I love Ethan! Deeg(?) is awesome too! I really liked that chapter anyway can't wait for more and sorry you were sick! :(
Yes keep going. The story is really getting going. And I am loving how much you are updating. It's amazing. This whole story is AH-MAZING!!! I like how you are throwing in that she is not like most guys but she can still be like a girl. And that she has all these guys who care about her. Good chapter.
However you write this I will be happy. They finally met. I am so happy for them. They were all surprised that she could do things like water ski and jet ski. What's up with guys thinking that girls cat do stuff like this. Oh well. Guess it just makes them think were hot when we surprise them. Good chapter.
I am just waiting for them to meet. It's all this suspense it's killing me. Ah I know it will be good. And then when I am least expecting it there going to just have a weekend together or a day. Or they will be together for a bit and then break up or something. Can't wait for more this really is amazing.