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  • briannal14

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    Before the rewrite it was great,, but now its AMAZING. Haha and yes, I TOTALLY saw that coming.
    August 7th, 2011 at 06:24am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    Can I freak? Cause im spazzing and freaking out here!!! More soon? PLEASE!
    August 7th, 2011 at 05:15am
  • CrazyCall

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    Your the writer you write how you like. Remember that it's your writing that will get you known one day. I liked it the way it was and I liked it this way too. Please update soon. I am now left wondering what happened between those two. Ahhhhhhh. Can't wait. Good job though. No hating here.
    August 7th, 2011 at 01:00am
  • cuteself22

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    I like it so far. and I did not expect ethan to be her partner. lol
    August 6th, 2011 at 10:37pm
  • spidermyth

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    Can't wait for more.
    August 6th, 2011 at 10:18pm
  • jojo13617

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    I like it(: Even though I was alittle sad when I found out you're rewriting it):
    August 6th, 2011 at 09:48pm
  • mama-val

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    No, I don't hate you. Lol this looks like a great place to start! Gives a mysterious air to the story! :)

    UPDATE SOON!!!
    August 6th, 2011 at 05:38pm
  • briannal14

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    Update rlyyyyy soon!!
    August 6th, 2011 at 09:29am
  • CrazyCall

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    This chapter was okay. Somethig was missing I don't know what it was. But I like it though cuz you introduced the fact Ethan thought she was amazing and her while snowboardig thing. Can't wait for more. :)
    August 6th, 2011 at 05:24am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    I'm an idiot and forgot to sub before but I did it now! So go me! Anyway I love this and I love Ethan! Deeg(?) is awesome too! I really liked that chapter anyway can't wait for more and sorry you were sick! :(
    August 6th, 2011 at 12:40am
  • LOV3ING Y0U

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    I Love it, it's really good:) Update son. :)
    August 5th, 2011 at 03:01pm
  • jojo13617

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    awwe this seems cute(: Keep updating >:D
    August 5th, 2011 at 04:43am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    Keep going keep going keep going .... Please! I love this I love this I Love this!!! :)
    August 4th, 2011 at 08:32am
  • Fly Away

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    :) I really like this story!
    August 4th, 2011 at 03:51am
  • CrazyCall

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    Yes keep going. The story is really getting going. And I am loving how much you are updating. It's amazing. This whole story is AH-MAZING!!! I like how you are throwing in that she is not like most guys but she can still be like a girl. And that she has all these guys who care about her. Good chapter.
    August 3rd, 2011 at 06:49pm
  • CrazyCall

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    However you write this I will be happy. They finally met. I am so happy for them. They were all surprised that she could do things like water ski and jet ski. What's up with guys thinking that girls cat do stuff like this. Oh well. Guess it just makes them think were hot when we surprise them. Good chapter.
    August 3rd, 2011 at 08:23am
  • softballstarr13

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    Loveeeeeeee it <3 I can't wait for your next update!
    August 2nd, 2011 at 11:11pm
  • briannal14

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    love! update!!
    August 2nd, 2011 at 10:51pm
  • Max Ryde

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    Cool. Update, I want them to meet!!!
    August 2nd, 2011 at 01:16pm
  • CrazyCall

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    I am just waiting for them to meet. It's all this suspense it's killing me. Ah I know it will be good. And then when I am least expecting it there going to just have a weekend together or a day. Or they will be together for a bit and then break up or something. Can't wait for more this really is amazing.
    August 2nd, 2011 at 08:52am