October 9th, 2011 at 11:15am
The Light That Wraps You - Comments
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Really great story. Love your writing style. I hope everything goes ok when she tells him who her heart came from. Awsome updates, keep up the great work. Cant wait to read what you have planned.October 9th, 2011 at 11:08am
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First off, let me just mention how much I love you for doing back to back updates. Two chapters in one night= SWEETNESS~ Second, I can totally see how everything played out the way the did. Yes, Lux didn't tell him that the heart she has is Luc's heart, but she still opened up and told Kris about her past. It's not always easy doing that, because it it leaves you feeling vunerable, and the fact that she did that shows that she really does have strong feelings for Kris. Plus, who wouldn't get caught up in the moment? If Kris Letang was standnig in front of me basically groping my chest, I'd ask to be taken to his bedroom too. ~TASTEFUL SEX FTW~October 9th, 2011 at 10:46am
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I don't understand. I thought that this chapter was going to be the big reveal! I thought that she was scared all this time to tell him that it was Luc's heart. It was anti-climactic for me. I had to reread it because I thought I had skipped over the part where she tells him who's heart it actually was. Why was she so scared to tell Kris about her heart condition? That doesn't seem like such a big deal. And oh my dear I don't think she should've slept with him without telling him!
I can't wait for your next chapter!October 9th, 2011 at 10:21am -
I love chapter 15! I'm not afraid to admit that I was crying while reading this chapter. This story is amazing and you have some serious talent. :) Keep the updates coming please. :DOctober 9th, 2011 at 09:28am
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Okay, so I don't know whether I love or hate you right now. I'm not even ashamed to admit that I was crying while reading it. Between that bit with Luc in Lux's dream, and her talking to Peter about how she's terrified to tell Kris about how she has Luc's heart, THERE ARE JUST SO MANY EMOTIONS AND MY HEART CAN'T TAKE IT. No pun intended. I know I probably say this in every comment I leave, but this story is so beautiful and I love it :)October 9th, 2011 at 09:24am
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So. I'm in college. A freshman, to be exact.
And I go to school two states away from all of my friends and family.
Today, my mom visited my older sister at her college (which is only a four hour drive as opposed to a 20 hour drive) and they went shopping together.
So I was feeling really homesick and down and ugh, right? And honestly one of my first thoughts was, "I hope The Light That Wraps You is updated today, that would be great."
It wasn't updated then and I found other ways to cheer myself up but I thought you'd be interested to know that I like this story so much it brightens my day, :)
I also wanted to say I love the layout. I know it's slightly irrelevant to what actually goes on in the story but, at least for me, the layout really adds to the moods. Whenever I read this, I picture Lux or Kris, like, laying in bed at night before they fall asleep just thinking to Luc. Almost like they're telling him about the day they just had.
But I love this story a lot, okay? So feel free to post tomorrow's update right now I swear we don't mind. Haha.October 9th, 2011 at 08:56am -
Can't wait for more!October 8th, 2011 at 05:47am
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i can't wait til he finally knows!!!October 7th, 2011 at 02:30pm
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Another great chapter !October 7th, 2011 at 12:42pm
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Such a good chapter!October 6th, 2011 at 05:23am
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Intense. Loved it!October 5th, 2011 at 09:06pm
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amazing chapter as always! i can wait for the next chapter i aways look forward to reading them :]October 5th, 2011 at 08:53pm
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i disliked the lack of kris and lux time but LOVED the moments with sid! it seems like a totally plausible reaction. and i can't wait to hear lux tell sid the story. hopefully it will make her realize that she and kris are meant to be.October 5th, 2011 at 07:42pm
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Oh my god I don't even know what to say right now. Reading this chapter takes me back to when the second hit to sid occurred, and just all the emotions I felt watching my captain take a hit like that. While this chapter is pretty heartbreaking to read, I thought you did an amazing job describing Sid and everything he must have felt that day. Plus, Lux is finally going to tell someone her story! :)October 5th, 2011 at 08:31am
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This is my new favorite story. I am in love with it.October 4th, 2011 at 01:56am
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I love Lux so much. She is just so kind, loving, happy, she loves great books, and she knows so much about so many things. I love hearing about the ancient greek mythology especially. She is perfect. Someone to aspire to be like. Even if she is only fictional.October 3rd, 2011 at 06:52am
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This is such a beautifully written story. I'm completely entranced. I love everything - the plot, the characters, the way you beautifully craft the beginnings of each chapter. It's just lovely. I'm still only a few chapters in, but I had to comment. Mostly because of the Guys and Dolls reference. That is one of my most favorite films. I loved that you used it here. Alright, well I must be going. I have some reading to tend to. ;)October 3rd, 2011 at 06:33am
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This is such a great idea for a story! I just really hope he doesn't react badly when he finds outOctober 3rd, 2011 at 05:06am
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^Ditto. This was just amazing.October 2nd, 2011 at 11:40pm
every chapter I'm like "she's gotta tell him about Luc"
patience.... :p