Looking For The Words - Comments

EVEREST, THAT IS NOT HOW YOU SAY YES TO AN ENGAGEMENT!
Don't act like it's such a burden, you perfect bastard! Just say yes and be happy!
"Yeah, listen to your goddamn fiance you got without telling me." This is exactly what I'd say to Nicole if she gets proposed and I don't know. I better be in on this shit I don't care if she doesn't know that she's going to be proposed to, I better know so I can be there to take pictures of her and Vic Fuentes. Those things will be worth thousands.
Anyway, this wedding would be awesome in the winter(when there aren't any dangers of cars getting stuck n the snow.....). Plus, then they can spend the night warming each other up *wink wink eyebrow raise*

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Fuck, I'm so late with these comments. eight months late to be exact. Oh well, not everyone can have perfect timing(coughcough Like Lucas coughcough)
Seriously, it's been so long since I've read this I had time to meet a guy named Lucas and confuse his personality with Everest's Lucas.
Seriously, I was reading the part where Lucas said 'my boyfriend' and I immediately thought "SO YOU ARE GOING OUT WITH JAKE YOU LIAR! I KNEW YOUR 'GIRLFRIEND' WAS A FAKE!" Then I realized what I was reading and everything made sense again.
Anyway. If I was Everest, I'd just fall to the ground and curled up into a ball. I wouldn't know what to do. I'd be crying yes on the inside, trying to think it over in my head, trying to remember how to breath, getting nervous because of all the eyes that are totally on him, trying to think of a name for our future kid, and thanking god that I live in Vermont because it's legal for two guys to get married there.
Then I'd just start crying because of all these emotions trying to get out but that are having such a hard time because there are too many and it'll just create a blockade.
I'm glad I'm not a gay man being proposed too.
But yay for Everest! Say yes or I seriously will cry.

Oh wow. It's been ages since I commented on this and I really have no idea why it took me so long because I love it.

I was going to mention something about how extremely adorable they were (because it's absolutely true) but that was before I read that last part. OMG, FINALLY. And it's so well written too and asgsgdjrjfrk it's so perfect I can't.

I really enjoyed that chapter. And this story. I actualy thought it was over until you guys updated recently. This story was amazing and I really enjoyed reading it. Can't wait to read the ending.

They are just toooo cute. I can't even

This story makes me so happy ❤

Gah! Nawwwww they got married. Ah. So much love.

You updated!! Yess!! But I feel like I've read it before... Well, even if I have, I still love Ev and Luc, they're perfect.

Where did this go? Why did you stop?!

So adorable. I love Ev's parents.

This story CANNOT end without sex in it. I'm serious. You CANNOT DO THIS.

But awh, they're so cute together <3

almost too sweet. <3

6 pages! And I'm at the top again! Hahahaha.

Only a few chapters left?! But I love Luc and Ev so much!

Wait. I'm lost. How much time has passed between now and New Year's? And what did Mallory do to Lucas that got him all mad? And forgive my ignorance of American geography - how far is it between Chicago and Vermont travel wise?

Love this update. Looking forward to the next.

Omgggggg I adore this story

Quite Cute.

Of course he said yes! Who wouldn't? And I do like the rings. I've never actually heard of people engraving thumbprints into rings before, but it's a really sweet idea and actually I think it's kind of creepy as well. But that's just me.

I really like Mallory. I'd flip out on my brother to if he proposed without telling me.

Quite cute. Hope he says yes. Update soon please.

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I'm only behind because I had a robotics competition! Don't judge me!
If you guys include a piggyback ride I'll love you forever. Not that I already don't, but maybe I won't haunt the fuck out of you in the after life like I had planned. Unless you want me to, I could kick some ass with my ghost-ass-kicking foot.
.....I'm not sure if it's just me, but some sentences in this chapter just made me stop and stare. Like..... what? I got what they meant, but just so weirdly ordered. Not that I'm one to talk, considering Alexithymia.
Malory reminds me of some characters in Nicole's other stories. Kind of like a fast talking, confident, easy to get along with chick. *sigh* I'm just waiting for the day when Nicole can wright I social inept awkward character.

No way. He didn't. He did. Oh lord. Moving fast much? Just tell me the ring suits a man. At least.