Fallen Future - Comments

  • Felisha2493

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    I read the first two chapters and thought that I'd start commenting now. I love it! :D Just the entire plot is great and got me interested right away. Iron man, Superman, Captain America etc. I liked how they were killed off. It shows a weakness in our super heros and that no one is perfect, not even those who protect us. I love it. Keep it up. :) I'm about to read the rest! Also HOW DO YOU MAKE LAYOUTS LIKE THAT! Mine are so plain and boring, I just want something cool with a photo of my choice.
    October 13th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • Gjhgs

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    Love it :) Keep doing what your so good at!
    October 12th, 2011 at 11:34pm
  • strychnine.

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    First- I'm an epic X-Men fangirl. Epic. Second- You freaking nailed the Joker and Wolverine. Seriously. Nailed them.

    I noticed a few grammatical errors, mostly misspellings and such. Nothing major, nothing that detracts from the story. I absolutely love the plot. To freaking death.

    Subscribed. :)
    October 12th, 2011 at 09:29pm
  • Patty Lovell

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    oh my lord. This is amazing!! Gosh, I love this so much, you don't even know. <3

    I knew right away from the summary (Good layout by the way!) that this was going to be good. I've never read a story about Batman, or the X-men or anything like that but jeeze, I've been missing out if all stories about them are this well written!! This is genius, and very original. Are there even other stories like this? If so they probably aren't as good, this is just so great.

    "She's a joke, and you won't keep her long. Even good jokes get tiring." I love this line. It's just a really good line, gaahhh.

    I also liked the part about the insane asylum, with the test. That was genius.

    I love this. Keep up the amazing work! :)
    October 12th, 2011 at 08:25pm
  • Robin 'The Sidekick'

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    Zomg, this is sick. You must update. I love super heroes!!!!!
    October 12th, 2011 at 07:36pm
  • Gjhgs

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    Robin sounds so hot :) Lol, I love this story so much :) The two authors that are working on this story have such flawless writing that everything runs smoothly.

    Update soon :)
    October 11th, 2011 at 11:17pm
  • Gjhgs

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    Love it! Your writing is perfect and entertaining. I can't wait to read more :)
    October 11th, 2011 at 04:56pm