Uneasy Hearts Weigh the Most. - Comments

i love ketley. i can't wait to read more c:

I like Ketley. :) I would probably be socially awkward too if I were sitting at a table with You Me At Six lol.

I am really looking forward to seeing what happens in this story. It is looking to be a very good one at that :) Update soon.

Let me just get this simple compliment out of the way: I like all the outfits you create for the main character. They are so cute and I love adding a visual to my reading experience! Ketley's paranoia really entertains me, and so does Olivia. They are so different from each other and it makes for very great dialogue. I noticed (in the past three stories I've read from you anyway) that you like to do that a lot with the characters. Have them contrast and then they learn to get along later. I really like that theme and I've seen it done in a very crappy manner but I just want to say that you do a great job with it :)

I'm glad Josh is introduced in this chapter in a very minimal way, and not just jumping in front of her screaming "HI I'M JOSH AND I'M SEXY AND YOU ARE GOING TO HAVE A CRUSH ON ME BECAUSE OF MY IRRESISTIBLE LOOKS!" Instead, he's just sort of studying her from afar, and it's obvious already that he is deeply fascinated by her because, like I said, she is so different from him. He seems to be trying to figure her out and she's just trying to keep her cool and not look like a babbling idiot in front of them. I like it a lot and I know that the next chapter is going to be awesome :)

Love the beginning. Her parents were driving me mad, but I find comfort in knowing that Josh will help her stick up her middle finger at them or something. I was sort of surprised to see the picture of her, with plugs and all, yet she says her parents will kill her if she goes to a show on the fly like that. I like the irony, and I hope this story will show more!

I'm very excited for this and cannot wait to see what happens next :)

I like how Ketley's kind of different in the fact that she's afraid of messing up and has to be perfect all the time. I'm guessing she's going to meet Josh and he's going to change all that.

im really excited to see where you take this.

I'm already in love with this story, and Josh isn't even in it yet! Hahaha. I love how you started this and I already cannot wait for more! Girl, how do you even keep up with all of these stories?!?! I love you! Haha. I cannot wait for more, I know it's going to be good!
Update again soon please!!!
LESS THAN 2 WEEKS UNTIL JOSH AND THE ADORABLE BOYS IN PERSON!

Excited to see where this story goes!!!

genuinely love you a little bit because no-one writes josh stories, ever. and yours are just perfect. proper excited for where this ones gonna go :-)
first chapter was fab!! but her parents make me wanna die a little bit.

Ooh...is this going to be a good girl/bad semi-sweet guy that corrupts good girl? I hope so :D

Ah the goodie goodie. Her parents already drive me nuts. I hope she becomes a badass haha. Great start! Can't wait for the rest!

i've been wanting to read a story like this for a long long long time. i'm excited!!

Amazing, seriously brilliant.

Great start to the new story. I think it has a lot of different possibilities and I can't wait to see what happens. I would love to see ketley loosen up but I am sure that will happen later on in the story. Update again soon :)

I'm really excited to read more of this story. Quite amazing so far.

My, that was quick! Ahaha.
So good already. I'm excited to see where this goes.. To see Ketley come out of her shell and do what she wants for once, not worrying about what her parents would think.
No sursprise, but I love it already. (;

I bet this story is going to be the one where Josh shows Ketley to live and make her own choices.
So her parents planned her whole life for her and now she is going by their plan.
She should have gone with Olivia since Petley is all by herself at the table.
I am so excited for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love all your stories and I'm totally on this You Me At Six kick right now.
So, yes, I'm definitely looking forward to reading this! :D

Update soon <3