Picking Up the Pieces - Comments

I wish there was some way she could feel less trapped.
If only Matt would open his eyes and see that she hates what she is going through
<3 Michele

Yup there is no way in hell that Matt is going to have Kari dressed in a skimpy swim suit or having her socialize with other males.
Kari seems to be getting depress with each passing day.
It's still hell when she is with Matt because he doesn't treat her any better well less violet, Matt still treats her almost like Tuck.
I just feel for Kari because she had to drop out of school and never got the chance to experience the normal teenage life.
I look forward to the next update!
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He is very protective of her.
The chapter was great. it was insight
to the "other" life Matt leads and how
her role works by being married to him
:D

I kind of feel bad for her, but I also wish she would not feel so badly about everything. She's got a pretty good life now compared to what she had with Tuck. Plus the guys treat her like family. Her life could be way worse, but I guess going through what she's gone through, she had the right to not be so positive. Love the update.

I know she doesn't exactly have the greatest life but I wish she would have a better attitude towards things and then maybe things would be better! <3

i love this so far. excited to see where it goes :)

So Tuck never really wanted to give up Kari away but he needed the money. It looks like he'll do anything to get her back, but unfortunately Matt isn't going to want to give her up.
Great update :D

Tut tut Tuck. Dominate Matt nom.

Can't wait for the next one! <3

I read this chapter four times, no joke. It was so
perfect that I just couldn't have enough once.
I enjoy every word. matt tuck has realized his
mistake but now he can't have her, mwahaha.
The smut scene with Matt S. ::drool:
I might have read that part five times haha.

loved the updates

loved the update, keep them coming!

See, I think that Matt would never sell her back to Tuck
He seems to enjoy her too much to let another man have her
as messed up as that sounds.
<3 Michele

This story remids me of a song! (:
"Stranger" by hilary duff! Kinda lame but the lyrics fit! Lol

I don't think Kari will ever learn to love Matt or anyone at the moment.
Tuck really scarred her for life at the tender age of sixteen and the abuse she got from Matt just added more scars to her physically and emotionally.
With the way Matt is treating, Kari won't be warming to him anytime soon.
So Tuck didn't get tired of Kari at all, he needed money and the only was to sell Kari to Matt since he offered a lot money for her.
I have a feeling that things between Tuck and Matt get will get ugly because they both want Kari for their own.
I feel bad for Kari because she never got to live a normal life other than a sex doll and she never got to feel what it's like to fall in love with someone.
She was force to be whatever person she had to be and she hates herself for feeling the pleasure from Matt because he knows how to turn her buttons.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

update soon so good love this

Tuck creeps me out. He's absolutely disgusting. And then Matt makes me want to like him with his little moments, like how he wants her to love him. And then there's the fact that she hates that she gets turned on when he fucks her. I love it! Can't wait for more!

This is such an amazingly great story!!! :D I can't wait for another update!

<3333

This is so awesome. It's genius! I love it!