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  • pjrox

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    Aw Kari :(
    October 27th, 2011 at 03:16pm
  • SMshadows

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    EWWWW Tuck is creepy! lol I love me some Matt stories so I was stoked to see this one! Just like with ur other stories, I'm now subscribed! Can't wait for the next one!
    October 27th, 2011 at 07:42am
  • a venom

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    loved it
    October 27th, 2011 at 07:13am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Amazing update :D
    October 27th, 2011 at 04:12am
  • banana sykes.

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    Two chapters and I'm completely hooked!! So in love with this story! I can already tell its going to be one of your best!
    October 27th, 2011 at 03:53am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Tuck creeps me out!
    Looking forward to more! <3
    October 27th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Tuck is an asshole
    and I hated how Matt threatened to sell her back to Tuck if she misbehaved.
    I hope life gets better for her
    <3 Michele
    October 27th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • hachie

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    So now Matt threatening her that if she doesn't comply to his wishes and drop the attitude then he's going to sell her back to Tuck.
    Man the way both Matts treat her is freaking brutal raping her until she black out or beating her until she gives in.
    Tuck is one sadistic fuck, I'll tell you that.
    Kari really does feel like a ragdoll, being used and told what to do by Tuck before and now Matt is doing the same thing.
    And she convinced herself that Matt doesn't love her at all and just using her as a front to the public eye.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 27th, 2011 at 03:07am
  • Clara3

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    I absolutely love this, please more <3.
    October 27th, 2011 at 02:58am
  • CharmedLuna

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    A lesser hell. Can that be possible?
    Maybe since she's so afraid of Tuck.
    This is just my favorite story! And not
    just because it's for me, haha. I love the
    plot and it's only been two chapters!
    October 27th, 2011 at 02:50am
  • reeseynicole21

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    Wow I love this story you really should update soon.
    October 27th, 2011 at 02:39am
  • Synful Shadows

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    I liked it, but man, Matt's a dick. And I was getting major chills from Tuck. I definitely don't like him. If I was Kari, I'd fight like crazy not to be near him either.
    October 27th, 2011 at 02:25am
  • Jorel Decker.

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    Be nice, Matt. ):
    October 27th, 2011 at 02:17am
  • brianna7x

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    Love it already.
    October 26th, 2011 at 12:41am
  • krisanfry

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    great begining
    October 25th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • a venom

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    loved it
    October 25th, 2011 at 09:49pm
  • xohunnyxo

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    Love it already! Kari is such a sweet girl :D
    October 25th, 2011 at 03:50pm
  • pjrox

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    This is brilliant. I love it x
    October 25th, 2011 at 02:38pm
  • banana sykes.

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    I'm so looking forward to this! It's going to be really good!!
    October 25th, 2011 at 07:57am
  • Unique;

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    i love it. (:
    October 25th, 2011 at 07:27am
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