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  • none1

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    Sad update, but a good one nonetheless.
    Messed up how they'd restrain her like that, but medical services can be really bad sometimes.
    I wonder what's happening to the boys, but I'm sure that'll come soon enough.
    June 7th, 2012 at 07:23am
  • none1

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    NO!!!
    Please don't cliff hang me too long.
    Must. Know. What. Happens. Next. O.O;
    June 6th, 2012 at 07:00am
  • been_waiting

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    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!! NEED! NEW! CHAPTER NOW!
    June 6th, 2012 at 05:00am
  • been_waiting

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    I need an update so badly
    June 5th, 2012 at 06:19am
  • lil' dynamite

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    This story is amazing... A friend made me read the first chapter and I just couldn't stop after that!
    June 1st, 2012 at 05:10am
  • this.is.bliss.

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    Just read all of this and oh my lord am I in love!! This is so different from most of what I find on here and I'm dying to find out how it will all end. :)
    May 29th, 2012 at 01:30am
  • none1

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    That really is a big question after a situation like that.
    Great update as usual :smile2:
    More please?
    May 25th, 2012 at 06:13am
  • amazingtay

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    So this story is quite amazing please hurry and update :)
    May 22nd, 2012 at 07:39am
  • cdas42121

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    Wow. Super intense...
    May 18th, 2012 at 10:42pm
  • none1

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    I'm glad to see an update!
    Hope to see them continue, but some things are more important then writing.
    And I don't care if it was short, it was eventful and an update and I haven't been disappointed by yours yet. :)
    May 14th, 2012 at 06:42am
  • ryan.berch

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    Pleaseeeee update soooooon :)
    April 27th, 2012 at 04:04pm
  • CountSynula

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    OH MY GOD!!
    ok first of all let me just say,.....I'm dying of suspense lol.
    Ethan and B must be okay or I'll flip.
    Secondly.....stupid Mibba messed up my sub on this and hasn't
    been alerting me.Luckily I got a wild hair and decided to go see
    if you had updated lol.
    Btw I live in Kentucky. =P
    April 23rd, 2012 at 10:03am
  • CountSynula

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    Well I was just sitting here eating my spaghtetti and needed something good to read.
    I checked the story updates and BAM you updated! I was like woo hoo.
    I enjoyed the chapter. I'm surprised that Layla is holding it together as much as she is. She's a really strong girl. I would have done went insane probably after being put through all that she was.
    Can't wait to read more!
    April 4th, 2012 at 05:25am
  • CountSynula

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    I miss your updates!!
    Hope that you are doing okay.
    March 31st, 2012 at 06:27am
  • ryan.berch

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    OMG this is so fucking good. Keep writing. I love how u actualy update quickly, so many people dont. This is probaly the best story i've ever read. Love it!!
    March 28th, 2012 at 03:42pm
  • CountSynula

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    Oh my!! Those cops sure were nosy lol.
    I don't like cops in general.
    I'm glad the girls got to eat but it sucks
    they didn't really get to enjoy it because they
    were too tense.
    I hope that Ethan and B are okay.
    March 24th, 2012 at 10:01am
  • Utero

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    Ive never been this pissed off at the sex trade
    March 24th, 2012 at 05:59am
  • none1

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    The bad thing about cell phones, they can easily be traced.
    Awesome update usual. :)
    March 24th, 2012 at 05:26am
  • none1

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    Please don't kill off the brothers :(
    March 14th, 2012 at 05:37am
  • CountSynula

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    O M G! That chapter was intense! :O
    I am like a mess right now lol.
    I can't hardly wait to see if Ethan or B makes it out alive.
    Not to mention I'm still a lil paranoid about Heather and Layla.
    I keep thinking some weirdo will find them and is in cahoots with D.
    LOL I hope they slaughter D though....I really do.
    March 14th, 2012 at 03:30am