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  • K.Ellmo1

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    Ah.. So you should uh- Put me as a character so I can BEAT THIS MUTHA TRUCKAS A--!!!!! Haha, really good story, as much as I hate- I mean hate to admit it, I'm rooting for her to die, that way she doesnt have to deal with this BS, if Ethan really cared for this girl he'd save her, who cares what Daddy-O says, I'd get her out, and I love how she stood her ground! I didn't want her submit to that fat bastard! Why should she? Haha, ah! If you wanted emotion when your readers read your story, you got it! Really great story, love it. (Apart from the abuse, more like the way you wrote it).
    January 18th, 2012 at 02:12am
  • CountSynula

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    Aww poor Layla. =( I hope D gets what is coming to him!!
    January 18th, 2012 at 01:54am
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    Ahhh!!lol you're such a tease. =P Can't wait to see what happens next!!I liked how Ethan was being nicer this time too.
    January 13th, 2012 at 08:54am
  • ashlynlol

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    Oh shit! What happens next!? Btw, i cant wait for the next update. :) thanks for sharing.. I really wish something good will happen between no. 3 and her...
    January 5th, 2012 at 02:33pm
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    Oh shit! What happens next!? Btw, i cant wait for the next update. :) thanks for sharing.. I really wish something good will happen between no. 3 and her...
    January 5th, 2012 at 02:33pm
  • a7x babe56

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    thanks for updating again it was great i cant wait for the next one!
    January 5th, 2012 at 12:46pm
  • CountSynula

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    You're welcome for the support and silent readers need to speak up cause it's a great story. =D
    January 5th, 2012 at 10:15am
  • CountSynula

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    I was glad you updated!! I shall check out your other story.
    December 27th, 2011 at 02:44am
  • charmingcohort

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    Really Good! Keep writing.
    December 26th, 2011 at 07:48pm
  • CountSynula

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    Great update!!
    December 18th, 2011 at 11:39pm
  • CountSynula

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    I strangely liked this chapter lol.I'm weird anyway thought cause I find the thought of being kidnapped thrilling.
    December 8th, 2011 at 01:34am
  • nymph

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    Loved your updates. Really curious bout the new chick. Update soon :)
    December 7th, 2011 at 12:02am
  • nymph

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    ghjkjhbvhm,mnbhguyikmnbvcdfsxcfghjm,;kjhbvfgh UPDATE SOON :D
    November 30th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • CountSynula

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    Loved the update!! =)
    November 24th, 2011 at 02:59am
  • CountSynula

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    I enjoyed this.I subscribed and can't wait to read more. =)
    November 17th, 2011 at 03:08am
  • a7x babe56

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    you are very talented i cant wait for the next one
    November 7th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    i like it so far :]
    November 7th, 2011 at 12:37am
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