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  • CerysEvans

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    Im so sorry iv been a silent reader, but i love this story!
    February 17th, 2012 at 12:53am
  • cdas42121

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    LOVE this story! Finally one without famous people and a solid story line
    February 15th, 2012 at 04:23am
  • CountSynula

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    You don't have to rewrite!!
    I loved it. ^_^
    I liked how emotional and intense it was
    between them!
    February 14th, 2012 at 04:05am
  • CountSynula

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    Haha well this update shocked me a little but in a good way!!
    I really hope she gets to see Ethan and that he loves her back.
    February 14th, 2012 at 02:26am
  • dearly.departed

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    Please update soon. Can't wait to see if she actually sees ethan. Thanks
    Marie
    February 13th, 2012 at 10:19pm
  • CountSynula

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    Woohoo!!There were two updates for me to read this time!!
    I got super excited lol.
    I really like the turn the story had taken and I like the
    layout backround change!!
    As always,good job! =)
    February 11th, 2012 at 10:12am
  • CountSynula

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    She should kick him in the taint and run away lol.
    Idk if I was in that situation I would just die probably.
    Gosh!
    Keep me in suspense. =P
    February 10th, 2012 at 09:24am
  • CountSynula

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    It was good for a filler!!
    =D
    I liked the lil dream about Ethan. ^_^
    February 9th, 2012 at 03:27am
  • the murder girl

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    awesome
    February 8th, 2012 at 07:59am
  • CountSynula

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    Hmm I wonder what they have planned?
    I'm still wondering if Ethan is okay and if he is bitter
    against Layla now,but I doubt he would be.
    He seems like a good guy.
    ^_^ Great as always and can't wait for more!!
    February 8th, 2012 at 07:42am
  • nymph

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    I never thought I'd get so attached to a story xD It just gets better every chapter, keep it up :P
    February 3rd, 2012 at 09:53pm
  • ashlynlol

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    Oh please please please dont let Ethan die... (sad face) and thank you so muchfor the regular update.. Really appreciate it... You have a very interesting plot... If i were to give a constructive critism, i would suggest that you try adding more description so that when we read, the picture becomes clearer but really interesting plot... Congratz... And youmight wanna re-read what you wrote sometimes cause there is an occasional spelling error... And i really hope thing turn out alright for layla and ethan.... Pretty please?
    February 2nd, 2012 at 09:55am
  • CountSynula

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    Uh oh!! I don't think that Layla will try to escape this time.I hope she sticks around for Ethan!!
    As always love the updates and I will be sad when the story ends lol.
    February 2nd, 2012 at 01:42am
  • CountSynula

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    Oh no.Poor Ethan!! =(
    Even if they do somehow manage to get
    out of that place alive,they will be mentally and emotionally
    scarred forever.
    Enjoyed the update as always!!
    It shocked me a little this time. =P
    January 31st, 2012 at 05:22pm
  • violetkarma

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    is she dead? Is HE dead?
    January 31st, 2012 at 02:19am
  • CountSynula

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    Yay!!Thanks for updating.Poor Layla.
    I hope she cuts all their peters off!!
    Soo on my profile I put a link to your story
    under the stories I favor most.
    =D
    January 29th, 2012 at 06:45am
  • CountSynula

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    Haha oh no!!
    I wonder who her date is with?
    I want to jump into this story and Dropkick D for being
    an ass!!
    Loved the update. =D
    January 27th, 2012 at 12:49am
  • strawberryshortcake

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    I like this. Update!(:
    January 25th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • CountSynula

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    Yay!! =D I got my fix lol.
    January 22nd, 2012 at 01:36am
  • nymph

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    Zomg update update update update update update update update update update update update update update PLEASE! :D
    January 19th, 2012 at 10:39pm
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