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  • beautiful liar.

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    i read chapter eighteen and read the title, and then i automatically pressed on 'alibi' to play. and then you said it down the bottom. and i was like. YEAH! (:
    March 11th, 2012 at 12:57pm
  • CountSynula

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    Eeeeep!! =O
    So many suspenseful questions you left me with!
    I really hope they get out of there! Somehow I don't think they are in the
    clear just yet.What about B?! Can't leave him behind. I was starting to really
    like him.
    Fabulous update and can't wait for more!!
    March 9th, 2012 at 01:07am
  • ScreamingIntheNight

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    I really like this! can't wait for next update =D
    March 8th, 2012 at 10:16pm
  • FlyingBirdd.

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    Oh wow, i love this story. Im inlove with Ethan and B! I lovr them. Goshy, update please (:
    March 8th, 2012 at 11:51am
  • CountSynula

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    Oh no!!
    That was shocking.
    Those poor girls.
    However, I still enjoyed the chapter.
    I squirmed reading it but I'm hoping she fucks Henri good
    with whatever was under the table. =D
    March 7th, 2012 at 04:31am
  • none1

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    Oh my god. This is not going to end well. I'm in audience here. more?
    March 7th, 2012 at 03:28am
  • Thorn-the-rose

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    Holy shit, wow, i just read this whole story in one night, you have an amazing brain, this is an amazing story. I love that she is aloud to love them both and that they both love her and each other also, i got upset when she started developing feelings for B because i was upset that Ethan would get hurt :/ but i'm happy now because everyone is happy :D
    March 6th, 2012 at 12:54pm
  • none1

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    I like how you touched on how people's views on what's normal when in such an extreme situation.
    February 28th, 2012 at 04:24am
  • CountSynula

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    Haha well in the beginning I was kind of iffy about her getting with Brent but now I'm not.
    I thought it was kind of hot LOL.
    I mean if they even had a threesome that would have been hot if they weren't brothers and all.
    =D
    Idk just when I think that they might have a bit of happiness I'm always fearful that something bad is gonna happen.
    It keeps me on egggshells but it's a good thing.
    February 28th, 2012 at 02:51am
  • tiptoes

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    I very much enjoy your speedy updates :)
    February 28th, 2012 at 01:59am
  • CountSynula

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    Uh oh! I wonder what D has in store for them. :O
    Good update as always!
    February 27th, 2012 at 10:44am
  • none1

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    This worries me. D doesn't seem like the type to just let someone go, even in her situation. But I could be wrong.
    February 27th, 2012 at 06:41am
  • tiptoes

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    I really enjoy this story. I'm sad that I caught up with the updates. It's written really well, as well.
    February 25th, 2012 at 10:20pm
  • CountSynula

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    tThat maduza chick stole the words out of my mouth lol.
    With every chapter there is something I don't expect and it's always
    a surprise.
    In a good way of course.
    LOL for a minute there I thought Layla was gonna make out with B.
    February 25th, 2012 at 08:13pm
  • none1

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    I must say at least once an update, sometimes two, you throw something into the story I don't see coming. I like that. Most stories I see on here don't do that to me.
    I don't think I've really been commenting on this story, and that I'm sorry for, but I keep up the good work. :)
    February 23rd, 2012 at 05:00am
  • CountSynula

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    Loved the longer update!
    Had been missing them. =D
    Glad her and Ethan got to knock boots lol.
    February 23rd, 2012 at 01:35am
  • iamsandra94

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    Why is this story so freaking good? I love it so much!
    February 23rd, 2012 at 12:01am
  • nymph

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    Your update helped me get through yet another horrible chapter of drivers ed.... keep em coming :D
    February 21st, 2012 at 05:50am
  • CountSynula

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    Aww!! =)
    Haha man I am dog tired tonight.
    Went to like 5 different stores after working all day
    but your updates always make me happy.
    I love the fact that they are getting to spend time together
    and he is being so sweet.
    Still,I get like this twinge of panic cause I'm afraid
    something bad and shocking will happen!! =O
    February 17th, 2012 at 02:44am
  • HYPERxSHADOW666

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    This is really good (:
    February 17th, 2012 at 01:26am