The Mess I Made - Comments

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Finally. Finally, finally, finally, Zach and Skyelynne are showing some fucking progress! It's like, bicker, bicker, bicker, then....LOVE. I'm really glad Zach believed Skye's story even after all his accusations that she was a liar. :] It's really heartwarming how Skye's determination ultimately led to Zach letting his guard down a little more in her presence.

And I choose to be Pro-Christmas-One-Shot. Lol. I'm looking forward to reading it if you decide to write it :)

Ohhhh I love this :) I'd really like to read a one-shot and see what they were like before all the bickering haha great job!! <3

Hey Its Ali!: It's kind of amusing haha Cameron and Ariana..those little shit heads XD and hopefully! I have to work on it though. Hopefully it's not going to be an off writing day. I hate those -_-

HA. That. Is. Genius. Writing to completely bitch out feelings...awesome. Lol.

Git is a funny word haha. And Cariana's attempt to get Zachlynne to make up...well. The next chapter shall be interesting! xD

musiclover14: Ah thank you! :o I think that's the first time Skye's ever been called sweet...which is kind of sad if you think about it hahaha and thank you again!
ALLSTARLOVE333: That's okay! I had more time to do what I wanted anyway. Yay! I'm glad you love it :) and I guess we'll see! I want to do a sequel but it's just hard D: I've fit so many things into just twenty chapters...but I'm trying to work it out and see what I can do.
AWTSSGTSMCFAN4EVER: Goodness that name took a while to type out! I hope that's a good ooh XD thank you for reading!

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Aw sorry it wasn't open! And I love Cam and Ari and they are SO perfect for one another! And I do indeed love this chapter! His wall is crumbling and now I'm hoping it will fall! :) please let I fall and them be together and I hope you do a sequel but whatever feels right to you :)

I. Love. This. I started reading it last night and I swear I got addicted! I like this version better :) I love how Skye keeps trying to get Cameron to notice Ariana, that's so sweet! Plus I love the flashback with Katherine and everything. Great chapter!!

MegaStar1821: :O Seriously!? Thank you so much! It really means a lot considering all of the amazing stories that are on here. :D

As soon as I found this story it was hard for me to stop :) This is one of the best stories I have read on here. Can't wait for more to come :)

Hey Its Ali!: I've had Harry Potter on the brain for the past few days! I want to watch all of the movies back to back but I have no patience :(
HECK YEAH :D and I like the word git :) and heck freaking yes. Katherine reminds me of so many girls at my school so it would be like getting revenge on them without getting into trouble. HEH

"You know who." "Voldemort's not here." xD That made my night haha! Especially being an avid Potter fan haha.

And you're welcome haha. I'm so glad Michael punched Steven in the face. He really is lucky that's Mike did to that git. Steven fucking deserved it omg. I think Skye should get to punch/bitch slap/catfight/seriously injure Katherine in the later chapters. It would be years of bottled anger rolled up into one fist xD

AWTSSGTSMCFAN4EVER: Seriously :o that's awesome! Thank you so much!
music4life5430: WOOOOO :D I'm glad people who read the last one still read the new one. That makes me really happy! Thank you<3
ALLSTARLOVE333: He started to open his eyes a couple of chapters ago but with the whole Cameron/Skye thing he went back to his old ways so he could turn it all around...who knows :P thank you for taking the time to comment though! It does make me feel special. & It was so stupid -_- they weren't even open so I just wasted an hour going up there blah

haha yeah they are :P but that is ok and YES someone got punched! now all I need is Katherine getting punched and I will be happy! and dude! you'd think Zach would start to open his eyes after all that went down, but somehow I doubt it :/ *sigh* and yeah I generally don't like or want to comment (like today) but cause it's you I will so feel special :) have fun with your dog thingiemachober...

I am so glad you started to post again I likes this story since the first time you started posting and i think its awesome :)

One of the best stories I've ever read!! Update soon!

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ALLSTARLOVE333: haha so many idiots in this story eh? I'm pretty sure everyone has been one so far o.O because I think each of them have pissed me off in there own way. & Thank you for commenting and reading! I know I don't like to comment very often but I'm glad you chose to do so.
Hey Its Ali!: I think you do actually XD
That's how I am with my little brother...even though I don't really like to admit it because he's a pain in my ass. Yes exactly! He's pretty much like this moron who sits behind me in one of my classes. The way he talks, walks, etc. He makes me so mad so in a way he's Steven because of how annoying he is XD & Thank you!<3

Lol I think I follow you on twitter haha...okay that was random.

So usually by the time I finish reading a chapter, I'm like stuck in a glass case of emotion xD But O felt only a couple things today(and that's not a bad thing it means that something really caught on to me) and those things were fear, apprehension, and anger. Because, after reading the story so far, I feel almost as if Nikki is my own sister. Maybe it's because I have a little sister of my own and I protect her at all costs and if he died out of my irresponsibility I could never live with myself. And if she got raped and lived...well let's just say I'd be in jail for some elaborate and well planned murder of the guy hahaha.

So Steven...dun dun dunnnnn....he reminds me of a bratty 5th grade girl lol. "I can ruin you." I freaking laughed out loud after I read that. He's one of those cocky guys at my school who think they're the shit xD He might as well be Katherine's conjoined twin.

Great chapter :)