The Mess I Made - Comments

Aw thanks! :) And I think this has got to be my favorite chapter. When Skye reminisces, it brings back some old memories from myself as well. I love how Cameron's there, how he's always got her back...I wish I knew a guy like that haha. I love how Cam holds nothing against Skye. <3

AH I'm excited for tour dates! :D and WOW you took my suggestion :D I feel special :D and I think it did flow better and works well :D I <3 Cam in this :D

ALLSTARLOVE333: I was actually thinking about doing that but wasn't sure :/ kfjdkgjdf now I want to go edit it like crazy haha but thank you!

Ok not my favorite chapter because I feel she should have talked to Cameron because I feel it may have fit better and flowed more easily to be honest, but it's ok I get why thy didn't talk and I still love this story and am waiting on pins and needles for an update :) and yay I don't have to shut up :)

ALLSTARLOVE333: Aw really? I hope you see them again soon! They really need to announce tour dates or something. I had to start getting their tweets sent to my phone just in case I wasn't on the computer when they were announced D:
& I would NEVER tell you to shut up! It just makes me happy that you are taking the time to read this even after it took me almost a year to get back into it but I plan to finish it this time!
Hey Its Ali!: Of course! I'll check it out once I get home from school! I love the title :)
& I had to cut the rehab story down since I went overbord :p and thank you!!!

Yeah, that's sort of how I like to write too! I have a story up called Asylum, can you check it out? And yeah that answered my question quite thoroughly lol. That's a really good concept amd philosophy.

I'm going to be very brief about the new chapter: Katherine is a little bitch. Omg. And I loved the rehab backstory. Short and sweet :).

I miss the boys too! I haven't met them since May the only time I met them :( but finally getting to the good stuff! :D I'm SO FREAKING EXCITED I don't think you comprehend! actually I know you don't that's how excited I am! :D
and you are updating pretty well :D I appreciate that :D
oh also warning I'm a crazy commenter when I like something and I lve this so I won't shut up until you tell me to, which you always can :)

Of course I care!
Yes Skye is an idiot but so is Zach(as you can tell from the the previous version of this story) I'm currently working on the next chapter. I'm trying to be better at updating than I previously was.
&Thank you so much for your kind thoughts. I really do appreciate it.

Alright so here is what I have to say if you care... You should be proud that is a good meaningful important chapter! She is an idiot however because Zach was tying to get back in her life because he loves her and she pushed him out... Not smart. I seriously can't wait for the next chapter so I hope you update soon. Feel proud of this story though!

Thank you!
& Hmmm...I don't even know. One day the idea just came to me so I went with it. I like the idea of a character having a troubled past whether their parents left them, drinking problem, eating disorder, etc. To me it just makes it more interesting and you never know when she'll relapse. It could happen just all of a sudden and just ruin all of her progress.
I also like how she's pretty much the opposite of myself. I've never had a drink. I've never smoked. If anything the only thing that's similar is her stupid sarcastic comments.
I hope this answered your question!

Don't be at odds with it. It's amazing. You write beautifully. I love the new chapter. Just a question - How were you able to wrap your head around an alcoholic character? :)

Thank you both so much!
I'm at odds with it also but that's because I'm never completely satisfied :p the first chapter is pretty much the one shot I was originally going to do. I had to cut it shorter than I would've liked because it was EXTREMELY long. I'm working on updating right now so hopefully it will get better if anything the first chapter is more of a flashback.

I'm TOO ECSTATIC that you have started this story up again to give you a thoughtful comment... I'm sorry so no thoughtful comment from me today, but it was good... not sure if I like this beginning or the other one better at the moment... I'm kind of at a draw... I think it will depend on how it all plays out afterwards :)

Wow! It's amazing! It's just as good as the original version, if not beter! I like the darker tone of the story...gahh I love it. Keep writing! :D