Teethmarks and Wolf Pelts - Comments

I love it!
Please update and I will bow down to your greatness c:

First I gotta say
I love your layout
Especially with the pic of the wolves :D
I love wolves

Anywho
I did quite enjoyed this story
Kinda creepy in some points, but it was still good. :D
At first I thought it was another one of "THOSE" fan-fics
But as I kept reading down through the chapters
I was like: "OMG!!"

Keep up the good work
<3

Love the chapter!
Very excites for the next update!

OMG! Simply Amazing! I can't wait for more! ;)

I just find Lewis down right sexy. Updates loved!

Team Felix...forever.
Lewis punched her in the beginning but now he wants to get all lovey-dovey.
No way!
I'm Belle by the way hehe.
I sat here and read all 16 chapters
Because I was completely hooked by the first.
Your writing style is simple, but very detailed.
I could picture everyone, the town, her house...pretty much everything.
Maybe it's just my overactive imagination,
but maybe it's also because you're an awesome writer.
You have such great ideas and I can't wait to read the sequel.
Let Sleeping Dogs Lie sounds very dangerous and interesting!
*subscribes

I liked that you described the lessons and on how two-natured are brought into the pack. The turning process seems interesting... Plus, Felix not wanting her to change adds a neat dynamic to the story.

You are very creative and have great ideas. Keep updating!!

"Let Sleeping Dogs Lie" seems very mysterious and intriguing...

I am so Team Felix, I can't even..
Really, though. I love how you write. It's difficult (for me, at least) to stay in the present tense but you do it so naturally. And while Twilight ruined the whole werewolf thing for me, this was like a breath of fresh air. [:

And I also like "Let Sleeping Dogs Lie." :3

If I'm not too late... I like "Let Sleeping Dogs Lie".

Omfg! Ah, I can't help but think "Is it really worth it Priscilla? Is it really?"

Also, something just isn't sitting right with me... Why would Conner run from his own pack? Their supposed to be like family right? Bleh, only time will tell.

Until then, I'll just be waiting until it gets updated ^_^

Gah! She might become a wolf!
Super excited!
And sequel?! Yes!
Very happy right now
Update soon!

Gah! She might become a wolf!
Super excited!
And sequel?! Yes!
Very happy right now
Update soon!

I hope she ends up with Felix.
I love this story and keep up with the good work :)

Felix is just adorable. I like him!
Super excited for the next chapter ^_^

Werewolf stories usually aren't my favorite, but this one is fantastic! Beautiful writing and word choice. Can't wait to find out who Priscilla chooses... Please keep updating!!!

I just found this story, but absolutely love it!
I actually kind of wanted her to.turn two-natured..
This is so interesting!!(:

*Whistles* Those two natured boys sure are fine! Aha, yeah. I can see Priscilla developing feeling for Felix. I like them as a couple because he's just so mellow.

Also, I really hope Conner doesn't die. I mean, for one, I know him and Priscilla are best friends, but he's not around and I would love to see him come back; see their relationship develop more than text messages and phone calls.

Annd, Lewis isn't as mean as he first was. Seems like he's warming up to Priscilla, no?

Then, I would just like to add: I love your story. You're one of the really good writers of this site that can turn something cliche into something terribly good. Teethmarks and Wolf Pelts is so addictive to read. And I'm not just saying that...

Okay, I'm done now. Bye!

Please don't change the layout! I love this layout alot and that's saying something.
Love the updata and I really hope they find Connor.
Update soon!

I have to admit, I was very surprised by this story. Seeing the picture of the wolf, it gave me the impression of one of those bland Twilight rip-offs. You know, the same old wolf/vampire/Mary-Sue female.
First off, I think that the layout is extremely lovely. All of the colors you've picked mesh very well with each other, it's nice to see a professional-like layout that doesn't clash. The photo of the wolves is unique and original, and it isn't just a generic picture of a wolf. It's interesting in a very good sense.
The summary made me want to read on, to be honest. Kudos, because sometimes it's very hard to compel the reader like that. I love how friend was used as 'friend', because it said a lot in just one little word. It made me think, "Huh. Why wouldn't this character consider them full friends?". It's good to make the reader want to have questions answered, because it gives us a reason to read on. Also, the line, "don't test me", is golden. Very mysterious, in my opinion.
I adore the description of the crickets and what they sounded like. It really gave me an actual feel for the environment in the story. One thing I noticed was that it'd be helpful for you to maybe explain Priscilla's objects more, such as what brand of computer she was using or exactly what game she was playing. It helps visualize and put yourself in the story more when you can actually imagine exactly what the character is using/doing. It's the little things like that, I think. The dialogue seems very believable, which is sometimes very hard to do. I actually looked forward to reading what the characters were saying to each other, instead of just skipping over it all. The story seems more like a narrative or memoir than a story, which can be good is not overdone. I think it'd be useful to add more modern lingo and phrases into Priscilla's thoughts, because teenage girls don't always think like New York Times Bestselling Authors. Maybe describe everyday things more, such as eating breakfast. It absolutely makes the reader able to relate more to Priscilla by seeing she does everyday things just like them, and that her life doesn't just consist of being creeped on by other characters and glazing over the little things. I think that what readers like most is to put themselves in the shoes of the main character and see how their life is like that characters.
It was totally helpful that you added a Character Page, because it helped me see and get a mental picture of what all of the characters looked like and their ages. You were very exact, which is good. I was even able to visualize the wolves and their coat colors.
I found no grammar or spelling mistakes.

I really enjoyed the story, and I look forward to updates. All together, I found the story lovely.

:O I'm in love with this story! Your writing is just wonderful and it's such a good idea for a story!
I read the whole thing, and you left it at just the most excruciating point! I can't wait to hear what Connor has to say. I don't know what will happen, but I know what I'd like to happen.
I know he's kind of an asshole, but for some reason I really want her to get with Lewis not Felix or for a love triangle between the two :') I hope she convinces Connor to come home as well. :D
Update soon please!